Carry a Portal with You
About This Novel
An ordinary clerk gets a portal that allows him to freely travel through the world of Xianxia. A low-level panacea can cure all difficult and terminal diseases. When a piece of discarded copper becomes the top material on earth. When magic illusion becomes a special effect that kills Hollywood instantly. A cross-border legend rising in the modern city was born!
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Official(12)Scraped 13d ago
Everyone who is doing tasks comes here.
Whether you're signing in or I'm commenting, it's all here.
The Holy Mother article is really not good-looking, far inferior to the Hegemony article.
I think the protagonist can start the next world when his strength reaches the golden elixir stage??
You can write a more targeted world, which will help the development of the protagonist. You don't have to write about the urban world all the time, as long as it develops steadily. Or you can write about some novel worlds, or you can learn from some worlds about cultivating immortals. This should be better. This is just my personal highlight. I hope the author can consider it😚😚😚
Well enough
The updates are okay, and the content is relatively rich. Overall, it's good!
What I wrote is irrelevant. How did this breakup come about? Brushed?
ヾ(●????｀●)?? Wow~
I just finished reading more than ten chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the dialogue was very stiff and the protagonist's personality was changeable.
Don't write the dialogue scenes in such a way that at first glance you will feel that they are forced in. The protagonist's character may be afraid of trouble in the first chapter, but in the next chapter he will be fearless.
Author, you are too watery
It's so confusing that I don't even want to read it. You can write dozens of chapters about a trivial matter. Do you think we have the patience to read it?
First, what the hell is Chapter 2? As he spoke, he knelt down. What kind of idea? !
Too few comments
Too few comments 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Community(0)
Official(12)Scraped 13d ago
Everyone who is doing tasks comes here.
Whether you're signing in or I'm commenting, it's all here.
The Holy Mother article is really not good-looking, far inferior to the Hegemony article.
I think the protagonist can start the next world when his strength reaches the golden elixir stage??
You can write a more targeted world, which will help the development of the protagonist. You don't have to write about the urban world all the time, as long as it develops steadily. Or you can write about some novel worlds, or you can learn from some worlds about cultivating immortals. This should be better. This is just my personal highlight. I hope the author can consider it😚😚😚
Well enough
The updates are okay, and the content is relatively rich. Overall, it's good!
What I wrote is irrelevant. How did this breakup come about? Brushed?
ヾ(●????｀●)?? Wow~
I just finished reading more than ten chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the dialogue was very stiff and the protagonist's personality was changeable.
Don't write the dialogue scenes in such a way that at first glance you will feel that they are forced in. The protagonist's character may be afraid of trouble in the first chapter, but in the next chapter he will be fearless.
Author, you are too watery
It's so confusing that I don't even want to read it. You can write dozens of chapters about a trivial matter. Do you think we have the patience to read it?
First, what the hell is Chapter 2? As he spoke, he knelt down. What kind of idea? !
Too few comments
Too few comments 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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