Tracing the Mind
About This Novel
Who I am? Where am I? Why have I forgotten? Is the game "Tianxing" reality or virtual? I love you, but I'm afraid, and I don't know what I'm afraid of. The fog between reality and virtuality, evolution or destruction. Just let me, Break all this and pursue the final truth.
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Official(3)Scraped 4d ago
come on
I have collected it and read the first two chapters. The paragraphs are too long. Don't use four lines, but two or three lines for easier reading. It begins with the story of the heroine falling out of love and being cheated on by her ex-boyfriend. The writing is too long-winded, and there is a large section of content that is worthless, especially with so many irrelevant scenes. When you write novels, you mainly write stories, not beautiful articles. Read more books by great masters! People tell stories first-rate
Although no one is watching, I still want to say it
In the past few days, I have been revising the outline to be more detailed before continuing to write. Wait for me!
Newbies on the road, please be patient.
If you have any friends, please give me some opinions. If there are any mistakes, please help me to correct them. Thank you to everyone who pays attention to me.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 4d ago
come on
I have collected it and read the first two chapters. The paragraphs are too long. Don't use four lines, but two or three lines for easier reading. It begins with the story of the heroine falling out of love and being cheated on by her ex-boyfriend. The writing is too long-winded, and there is a large section of content that is worthless, especially with so many irrelevant scenes. When you write novels, you mainly write stories, not beautiful articles. Read more books by great masters! People tell stories first-rate
Although no one is watching, I still want to say it
In the past few days, I have been revising the outline to be more detailed before continuing to write. Wait for me!
Newbies on the road, please be patient.
If you have any friends, please give me some opinions. If there are any mistakes, please help me to correct them. Thank you to everyone who pays attention to me.
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