From Fresh Meat to Superstar

Some people say that the Shu part is not very well written. I took a look and found that there are indeed problems in this area. I feel that my description is not very clear, and the supporting characters have a weak sense of existence. In fact, I could have made a major change, but I gave up in the end because the subsequent plot is consistent with this part of the plot. If I changed it, I might have to completely overturn the subsequent plot, which would be a bit outweighed by the gain. Of course, if you have any suggestions about the plot, you can write them down here. As long as it doesn't affect the big plot, I can try to write them out.