
Start with Hinata and Travel Through the Heavens
About This Novel
Traveling through the world of Naruto and becoming a little transparent member of the Hyuga family, I originally thought I could get incombustibles, but I didn't expect to get the copy system of the heavens and then travel through the heavens and copy the world. (The main world is Naruto, Naruto - Thief - Harry Potter - Uncle Nine + one person - Fairy Tail - Shoye, the rest is to be determined)
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
In the later Republic of China world, people need the protagonist to save the world. Why does Buddhism still plot against the protagonist? Whether you want to save someone or not, it's not the protagonist's own world, and it's not like he completely needs this world and is being plotted by Buddhism.
Occasionally I glance at the writing, which is a bit interesting, but I can't bear to keep writing like this.
Forehead
The main character is written in an epileptic manner, which is a bit unaccustomed to him.
Passers-by seem to have no brains. This tomb robbing note is cheating in front of passers-by.
Can't Naruto copy more abilities? For example, the chakra of the nine tails in Naruto, the flying thunder god of the fourth generation, and Itachi's kaleidoscope
It's a eunuch. Don't look at the unfinished building. Stay away.
The outline is okay, but the writing is really a problem. I persisted until more than 40 chapters, and I gave it three stars even though it was the first book. I suggest that for the second book, I should accumulate more and read other people's books, and the writing will be better slowly.
I know why this book has such a low score. Those who can find this book just want to read the Naruto fanfic. After explaining that the protagonist went directly to the world of Tomb Raiders, even though he is a Zhutianliu, he didn't go through it so early.
Author, I have been banned from your book about dragon spirits. Can you please unblock it?
One chapter to persuade people to quit. The writing is too poor and the sentences are not fluent. I can't stand it at all.
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Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
In the later Republic of China world, people need the protagonist to save the world. Why does Buddhism still plot against the protagonist? Whether you want to save someone or not, it's not the protagonist's own world, and it's not like he completely needs this world and is being plotted by Buddhism.
Occasionally I glance at the writing, which is a bit interesting, but I can't bear to keep writing like this.
Forehead
The main character is written in an epileptic manner, which is a bit unaccustomed to him.
Passers-by seem to have no brains. This tomb robbing note is cheating in front of passers-by.
Can't Naruto copy more abilities? For example, the chakra of the nine tails in Naruto, the flying thunder god of the fourth generation, and Itachi's kaleidoscope
It's a eunuch. Don't look at the unfinished building. Stay away.
The outline is okay, but the writing is really a problem. I persisted until more than 40 chapters, and I gave it three stars even though it was the first book. I suggest that for the second book, I should accumulate more and read other people's books, and the writing will be better slowly.
I know why this book has such a low score. Those who can find this book just want to read the Naruto fanfic. After explaining that the protagonist went directly to the world of Tomb Raiders, even though he is a Zhutianliu, he didn't go through it so early.
Author, I have been banned from your book about dragon spirits. Can you please unblock it?
One chapter to persuade people to quit. The writing is too poor and the sentences are not fluent. I can't stand it at all.









