The Witcher: the Road to Transcendence from Marvel

The author's writing skills are not strong enough and he is not serious enough. Many details of the original setting of Harry Potter have been changed. The key is that the changes are not smooth and unreasonable. The protagonist is also very divisive in writing. He claims to be a master, but he has experienced many murders in the world, and he is also ruthless. However, in actual battles, he is a noob, and his behavior is even more so. His mood swings are extremely high. He is also divided into being ruthless one second and turning into a noob the next. The plot is okay, but the details are sparse. If you don't have enough IQ, you can't write about wizards and wizards. The author's IQ is equal to the protagonist's IQ.

Hermione gets to choose classes in first grade and it pisses me off

The author's writing skills are not strong enough. The greatest wealth of a time traveler is to know the plot well, don't talk about talent. If a person living in a peaceful era goes to a precarious place, if he does not know the plot, dying generously is the only way out. If he knows the plot, he must follow the plot to plunder and grow. Why after reading more than ten chapters, the author created the magic pattern. . It also describes a scholar who seems a bit slow to the plot. It's meaningless. The readers you're trying to win by writing a fanfic are those who have read the plot. The first few chapters have driven away a group of readers. I haven't finished it yet. I'll give you three stars for the time being. Please read another 100 chapters to see what happens.

The Ancient One was written as if he was eternal, and the protagonist was asked to fight against Mephisto. The protagonist is still a novice. The protagonist can time travel and is still afraid of her. He directly traveled through time and grew up to be a big boss. Then he came back to refine the Ancient One. He was afraid of Mao. He acted like he was caught as a thief.

Those professors said how excellent and knowledgeable the protagonist is, but I feel that the protagonist's combat power is still too mediocre, or that the author has not highlighted it, there are no spells, there are no magic patterns, etc.

Please give Wes Irvine a "real name"

It's a generally good book, very interesting.

The main character is very stupid, he doesn't have a normal IQ, and food and grass are not considered, so it's okay to pass the time.

The later part of the Marvel plot is a bit uncomfortable to watch.

The wizard's is knowledge, research, and what he sees is nothing. There was a mess everywhere.