The Witcher: the Road to Transcendence from Marvel

The author's writing skills are not strong enough and he is not serious enough. Many details of the original setting of Harry Potter have been changed. The key is that the changes are not smooth and unreasonable. The protagonist is also very divisive in writing. He claims to be a master, but he has experienced many murders in the world, and he is also ruthless. However, in actual battles, he is a noob, and his behavior is even more so. His mood swings are extremely high. He is also divided into being ruthless one second and turning into a noob the next. The plot is okay, but the details are sparse. If you don't have enough IQ, you can't write about wizards and wizards. The author's IQ is equal to the protagonist's IQ.

Hermione gets to choose classes in first grade and it pisses me off

The author's writing skills are not strong enough. The greatest wealth of a time traveler is to know the plot well, don't talk about talent. If a person living in a peaceful era goes to a precarious place, if he does not know the plot, dying generously is the only way out. If he knows the plot, he must follow the plot to plunder and grow. Why after reading more than ten chapters, the author created the magic pattern. . It also describes a scholar who seems a bit slow to the plot. It's meaningless. The readers you're trying to win by writing a fanfic are those who have read the plot. The first few chapters have driven away a group of readers. I haven't finished it yet. I'll give you three stars for the time being. Please read another 100 chapters to see what happens.

Those professors said how excellent and knowledgeable the protagonist is, but I feel that the protagonist's combat power is still too mediocre, or that the author has not highlighted it, there are no spells, there are no magic patterns, etc.

The Ancient One is written as if it is eternal, and the protagonist is asked to confront Mephisto. The protagonist is still a novice. The protagonist can travel through time and is still afraid of her. He directly travels through time and grows into a big boss and then comes back to refine the Ancient One. He is afraid of Mao. He behaves like he was caught as a thief

Please give Wes Irvine a "real name"

It's a generally good book, very interesting.

The main character is very stupid, he doesn't have a normal IQ, and food and grass are not considered, so it's okay to pass the time.

The later part of the Marvel plot is a bit uncomfortable to watch.

It's okay. The first part is pretty good, although the writing is a bit inconsistent. In the end, the protagonist looks like a robot and has no entertainment interests. The back part is very boring. There can be no heroine, but it doesn't mean that I don't touch all the girls.