Xiu Xian: My Super Portable Space

Is this a fairy tale or a martial arts novel? After reading more than 50 chapters, I still haven't seen any traces of immortality. The plot is not very good, it's like a running novel, and the title is just a charlatan.

I really can't stand it anymore, how many harems have I collected?

Others are wine mixed with water, but you are water mixed with wine! What can be explained clearly in one sentence is to go back and forth on the water for a while! Everything needs to be mentioned again and again from different angles!

What does the author think? The main character is an idiot who just starts to attack every time he is wronged. This is the world of cultivating immortals, where you can beat the young and the old, not to mention that you have your own family!

Well, I just took a quick look at it, and not only did it not have any highlights, but the author didn't realize that it was an imbecile. Not to mention the potato crops with extremely high yields per mu, corn, the food crop with the highest yield per mu, was written down in junior high school textbooks decades ago. The current yield of standard fields is 900 to 1,200 kilograms per mu, and the maximum yield of experimental fields is 1,600 kilograms. You said that the yield per acre outside is about one hundred kilograms during the time you are cultivating. You must be out of your mind.

The author is obviously a master of water characters. Many plots can be simplified, but he just repeats the previous plots like a cow chewing his tongue. For example, the author actually started the story about the plot where Master Wan wanted to eat Purple Dew Pills from the discovery of the cave, which made a lot of words flow smoothly. There are many other similar places.

They are too tolerant towards women. Many books are like this. They are either like licking dogs, or they write women very badly and then generously forgive her. Your writing style has not changed after so many years?