
Your Chat Group? No! Be Mine!
by The One With The Only Heart
About This Novel
As a direct disciple of Taishang Dao Sect in Mingkong Great World, Li Qing relies on Sanqing. Sensing the invitation to the chat group, Li Qing looked at the portrait of Daozu hanging on the wall and bowed, "Daozu is here, and there are external evil spirits that have invaded Daozu." If you are interested, you can read the new book "I Wanted to Practice Wholeheartedly, but I Walked on the Path of a Villain".
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Official(28)Scraped 6d ago
The author cannot find the primary and secondary
Since it is a chat group novel, the plot of the main world should not take up too much. Especially the plot of the main world is not very attractive. For now, the plot of the main world is complicated and unattractive. There is nothing going on at the other end of the chat group, and the writing on both ends is not very good. Sooner or later it will be over. The core attraction of novels like Zhutian Chat Group is the chat group, which creates trouble everywhere and subverts the original plot. Several readers came here for your own original main world plot. If it's well written, some people will read it, but if it's not well written, people won't want to read your main world plot at all. It's just that you don't write much about what readers want to see, and write a lot about what they don't want to see. Isn't this just a sign that sooner or later the book will fail? Chat group novels are actually very easy to write. After all, many IPs are integrated together. You copy a little here and there, and add a little bit of your own settings. It's really easy. As long as you have enough imagination, you can capture what the readers want to see. Add some popular IP characters to make up for the regrets of the original plot. It is easy to attract some readers. Look at what Zhutianliu is doing, isn't it just to cause trouble and some things that you feel regretful in your heart?
Wait, the title of this book, could it be, bring it to you!
To be honest, this group feels useless.
Maybe it's because of my low education. The more I read, the more confused I became. I felt like the protagonist had a chat group. After reading more than 50 chapters, I didn't know the skills and weapons that the protagonist practiced. I just felt that the protagonist was too ungrateful and had an awesome background. I don't understand anything else!
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Qqqqqqq group hahahahahahahahaha
The book is a good book, but the title is a bit discouraging! I visited the bookstore several times and saw this book. I finally came in to read it after seeing the introduction. I suggested that the author change the title of the book!
This setting is not good
First of all, the background and character of the protagonist are not pleasing to the eye. He was a bit petty at first, but suddenly he became a money-splitting boy. Why did the group leader give him pills after he said such things to the protagonist? Although it was a blessing to the protagonist, it was still very unpleasant to watch. I'll write you a background The protagonist traveled across the earth, but he was reincarnated, so even if he was a time traveler, the bosses didn't care. This way the sense of immersion can be much stronger Next, how should you write the plot? If the group leader treats the protagonist like this, then don't give him pills and let that Chen get frustrated, so that we can feel comfortable watching. In terms of plot, the plot of the protagonist in a chapter must be at least 55 times higher than that of other characters. Your plot as the protagonist is a bit lacking. Your settings are still very good, but the writing power and lightning protection are a bit worse.
How to say
There is a trace of cutting off the rice, there is a trace of a running account, there is a trace of forehead, there are no words.
Who is the protagonist?
Pig's feet are not time travellers, and the sense of substitution is not enough.
Not interesting
I feel like there is no sense of immersion, the plot is not interesting, the woman appears inexplicably, it is quite boring anyway.
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Community(0)
Official(28)Scraped 6d ago
The author cannot find the primary and secondary
Since it is a chat group novel, the plot of the main world should not take up too much. Especially the plot of the main world is not very attractive. For now, the plot of the main world is complicated and unattractive. There is nothing going on at the other end of the chat group, and the writing on both ends is not very good. Sooner or later it will be over. The core attraction of novels like Zhutian Chat Group is the chat group, which creates trouble everywhere and subverts the original plot. Several readers came here for your own original main world plot. If it's well written, some people will read it, but if it's not well written, people won't want to read your main world plot at all. It's just that you don't write much about what readers want to see, and write a lot about what they don't want to see. Isn't this just a sign that sooner or later the book will fail? Chat group novels are actually very easy to write. After all, many IPs are integrated together. You copy a little here and there, and add a little bit of your own settings. It's really easy. As long as you have enough imagination, you can capture what the readers want to see. Add some popular IP characters to make up for the regrets of the original plot. It is easy to attract some readers. Look at what Zhutianliu is doing, isn't it just to cause trouble and some things that you feel regretful in your heart?
Wait, the title of this book, could it be, bring it to you!
To be honest, this group feels useless.
Maybe it's because of my low education. The more I read, the more confused I became. I felt like the protagonist had a chat group. After reading more than 50 chapters, I didn't know the skills and weapons that the protagonist practiced. I just felt that the protagonist was too ungrateful and had an awesome background. I don't understand anything else!
...
Qqqqqqq group hahahahahahahahaha
The book is a good book, but the title is a bit discouraging! I visited the bookstore several times and saw this book. I finally came in to read it after seeing the introduction. I suggested that the author change the title of the book!
This setting is not good
First of all, the background and character of the protagonist are not pleasing to the eye. He was a bit petty at first, but suddenly he became a money-splitting boy. Why did the group leader give him pills after he said such things to the protagonist? Although it was a blessing to the protagonist, it was still very unpleasant to watch. I'll write you a background The protagonist traveled across the earth, but he was reincarnated, so even if he was a time traveler, the bosses didn't care. This way the sense of immersion can be much stronger Next, how should you write the plot? If the group leader treats the protagonist like this, then don't give him pills and let that Chen get frustrated, so that we can feel comfortable watching. In terms of plot, the plot of the protagonist in a chapter must be at least 55 times higher than that of other characters. Your plot as the protagonist is a bit lacking. Your settings are still very good, but the writing power and lightning protection are a bit worse.
How to say
There is a trace of cutting off the rice, there is a trace of a running account, there is a trace of forehead, there are no words.
Who is the protagonist?
Pig's feet are not time travellers, and the sense of substitution is not enough.
Not interesting
I feel like there is no sense of immersion, the plot is not interesting, the woman appears inexplicably, it is quite boring anyway.











