Sign in to the Maoshan Plane at the Beginning

Sign in to the Maoshan Plane at the Beginning

by Yin Yue Han

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1.0Mwords452chapters
Latest:
Ch. 452The Road is Me
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About This Novel

After waiting for three years, he signed into a world at the beginning. Here, the world was changed and his spiritual energy was lost. However, he was extremely talented and could use force to settle a pure land. In the Maoshan world, seeking the truth is difficult. In the world of fairy swords, I am the only one who is free. Cover the world and fight against the emperors. ... Let's see how Jiang Lin stepped from an ordinary person to the Avenue of Heaven.

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Su Shi54mo ago

The writing in the Republic of China was pretty good.

The Republic of China was written very well, and even Fairy Sword was either bad or just about the same. Fairy Sword was stingy and kept changing the plot. Unlike the Republic of China, one was for the development of the country and the other was for the restoration of the spiritual energy of the world and the restoration of the way of heaven. This comparison comes out! From the point of view of pretentiousness, writing Fairy Sword is too pretentious and not enough. There are only a few people in the plot of Fairy Sword. When I read the story you wrote about the pride of your men when you became the commander-in-chief and attacked the city in the early Republic of China, the admiration and admiration of the people during the development, and the gratitude of those on Maoshan Mountain who regained their aura. From the plot point of view, Fairy Sword is about breaking through when you are not strong enough in the past. Isn't this a cool novel routine? , Just followed the route of the original work and added another plot point of Fairy Sword. Although the Five Spiritual Beads are very useful for restoring spiritual energy, I think there is nothing wrong with writing it this way, but it doesn't look good! In the Republic of China, the IQs of the protagonist and the supporting characters are all online. When he first arrived in the Republic of China, the protagonist used his brain to integrate into the Jiang family, how to recruit younger brothers to develop his power, how to become disciples, how to fight, and how to conquer territory. To summarize, the plot of Fairy Sword only has an outcome, while the plot of the Republic of China has a process but no result because it is not finished. In the Republic of China, it is no problem to write more than a hundred chapters. With my many years of experience in reading novels, Fairy Sword has already seen the results. There is no need to write more than one chapter. It is boring. Now in the Republic of China, there have been some problems with fairy swords.

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Limeng✘53mo ago

It's a bit poisonous in the back

When "Zhetian" had already killed several people, and when the cultivators' abilities had already been witnessed, it was written that ordinary people screamed in front of the protagonist, and a Immortal 3 Dao Slayer King wanted to kill an ordinary person, but he could still let him live for so long.

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User 53140032720048mo ago

Do you have a system? Also, where do zombies come from in reality?

You are playing fantasy and telling me to believe in science? !

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Lost Husband!55mo ago

Isn't this the theme of Laolong?

The story line and content are similar. Brother, if you plagiarize, you should have some content of your own.

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ᝰ᭄ꦿᝰꫛꫀꪝ55mo ago

smile

Come and smile for me and see if you are handsome? ..................

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ᝰ᭄ꦿᝰꫛꫀꪝ55mo ago

This protagonist is a bit weird

When will this picture be reviewed? This picture is amazing, I am an expert at it.

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Myth Hunyuan Wuji Luo Tianxian Taixuan56mo ago

There is nothing interesting about a plagiarized book

What I plagiarized is the novel in Qidian. The name of the novel is, The Heavens Begin from Maoshan.

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Lifelong Learning55mo ago

Start: A Ming Kingdom plane

And the heavens begin from Maoshan. The dragon rises into the sky. Now updated to more than 200 chapters. I don't know who is faster or slower, just my personal opinion.

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Kekekete50mo ago

I lost

I said that it felt exactly the same as a certain book. I basically copied and pasted it, but changed the apprenticeship of Xu Zhenren to "Zhao Xing". Really, I didn't copy it well. In Dou Fa, the master became Xu Zhenren. Why did I forget to change it?

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Reader 161125642332255846440mo ago

Don't know what it is.

I want to scold but don't know how to relieve my anger.

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