The First Sword in Jianghu Fengyun
About This Novel
The rivers and lakes are undercurrent, and the storm is rising again. The famous swords in the world show off their sharpness, and each shines in the moonlight. Traveling and exploring martial arts planes, wandering between life and death, and fighting against human nature. Blood knife, mandarin duck knife, dragon-slaying knife, deer-cutting knife, cold moon knife, Xiao Li flying knife, round moon scimitar, Tianya Mingyue knife, who is the best knife in the world? "Everyone who comes here has their own surname. I will not kill any unknown person with my sword!" ... Completed book: "Little People in the Jianghu Plane" New book: "The ancient dragon drinks alone in the rivers and lakes!"
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Official(23)Scraped 23d ago
As a time traveler, Pig's Foot lacks knowledge of the plot, so what's the point of traveling through time? No wonder no one sees this and dissuades most people.
The protagonist is 13 years old and has traveled through time. He has not developed his outlook on life and doesn't know the plot yet.
Anyway, there is no sense of immersion. If you write like this, you might as well write about the indigenous people. Why bother adding time travel?
One of the few devoted male protagonists in online novels
Not to mention anything else, it is extremely rare for the protagonist to be able to accompany Lan Fenghuang devotedly. And although the author's writing style does not involve H, the description of the two emotions is quite interesting.
Is the protagonist going to become a swordsman like Hua Xinfeng or a swordsman like Qi Luosheng?
Sense of immersion
Since you want to write your own Jianghu story, don't travel back in time to the martial arts novels that everyone is familiar with. If you travel back in time and don't know the plot, it will make people quit.
poisonous
The writing of the first world is pretty good. Even the young apprentice of the Blood Sword Ancestor in City Secrets is very scheming. The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist doesn't know the plot at all. This is still Zhutianwen. The protagonist has never seen these martial arts before and only knows a few famous names, that's all. The style of painting has changed a bit since writing about Shui Sheng. The second world is smiling proudly, and the more you watch it, the more depressing it becomes. The male protagonist has always been meddling in his own business. From the time when Tian Boguang, Yilin, and Linghu Chong were in the restaurant, and when they went to Jinpen to wash their hands, Mo Da asked him to help, and the male protagonist went there with a full sense of justice. It was clear that he had to offend Songshan, who had a rough relationship with him. The others did not save Liu Zhengfeng, so he saved Liu Zhengfeng, a selfish guy. Qu Yang asked him to find Ren Yingying, so he took Qu Feiyan to find him. They had only known each other for a long time, but the decisive and murderous protagonist in the previous world seemed to have changed into a completely different person. There are provocative villains all the way, from the inexplicable provocation by the Taishan sect elders in the restaurant, to the Qingcheng sect's slander of being a demon sect, to Mo Da's letter asking him to come to the rescue, where he pretends to be the future leader of the Hengshan sect and has a deadly feud with Songshan, to when he sends Qu Feiyan to Ren Ying Yingna sought medical treatment, but was still made things difficult, and finally became Lan Phoenix's licking dog. This developed the heart of a holy mother. It was a time travel, and she was always doing inexplicable things. The protagonist was not aware of the plot, had no sense of direction, and did not know what she was doing.
I time-traveled when I was thirteen, so I stopped watching because I didn't feel like I was immersed in it.
A 13-year-old who travels back in time is basically the same as aboriginals. Moreover, a 13-year-old child who has not studied much and has no relatives has not developed his basic outlook on life. It is boring to travel back in time and be like aboriginals in the past few years. It is better to write about the time after 20 years old. After all, the basic outlook on life of a 20-year-old in my country is very correct.
Wearing it round after round is very tiring.
There is no real world, it's all about wearing clothes, which makes me a little tired. The author has written every world well. I just can't set up a main world.
Swordsman Sword Network Sanmingjiao, Ba Dao, Cangyun
Talk about your feelings
If I am in such a situation, being framed and hunted by others, if I don't die, then when I have the power to traverse the world, I will kill them one by one, cut off their inheritance, and eliminate their descendants. I don't want to take the initiative to harm others, but if others want to harm me, I will pay back ten times or a hundred times.
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Official(23)Scraped 23d ago
As a time traveler, Pig's Foot lacks knowledge of the plot, so what's the point of traveling through time? No wonder no one sees this and dissuades most people.
The protagonist is 13 years old and has traveled through time. He has not developed his outlook on life and doesn't know the plot yet.
Anyway, there is no sense of immersion. If you write like this, you might as well write about the indigenous people. Why bother adding time travel?
One of the few devoted male protagonists in online novels
Not to mention anything else, it is extremely rare for the protagonist to be able to accompany Lan Fenghuang devotedly. And although the author's writing style does not involve H, the description of the two emotions is quite interesting.
Is the protagonist going to become a swordsman like Hua Xinfeng or a swordsman like Qi Luosheng?
Sense of immersion
Since you want to write your own Jianghu story, don't travel back in time to the martial arts novels that everyone is familiar with. If you travel back in time and don't know the plot, it will make people quit.
poisonous
The writing of the first world is pretty good. Even the young apprentice of the Blood Sword Ancestor in City Secrets is very scheming. The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist doesn't know the plot at all. This is still Zhutianwen. The protagonist has never seen these martial arts before and only knows a few famous names, that's all. The style of painting has changed a bit since writing about Shui Sheng. The second world is smiling proudly, and the more you watch it, the more depressing it becomes. The male protagonist has always been meddling in his own business. From the time when Tian Boguang, Yilin, and Linghu Chong were in the restaurant, and when they went to Jinpen to wash their hands, Mo Da asked him to help, and the male protagonist went there with a full sense of justice. It was clear that he had to offend Songshan, who had a rough relationship with him. The others did not save Liu Zhengfeng, so he saved Liu Zhengfeng, a selfish guy. Qu Yang asked him to find Ren Yingying, so he took Qu Feiyan to find him. They had only known each other for a long time, but the decisive and murderous protagonist in the previous world seemed to have changed into a completely different person. There are provocative villains all the way, from the inexplicable provocation by the Taishan sect elders in the restaurant, to the Qingcheng sect's slander of being a demon sect, to Mo Da's letter asking him to come to the rescue, where he pretends to be the future leader of the Hengshan sect and has a deadly feud with Songshan, to when he sends Qu Feiyan to Ren Ying Yingna sought medical treatment, but was still made things difficult, and finally became Lan Phoenix's licking dog. This developed the heart of a holy mother. It was a time travel, and she was always doing inexplicable things. The protagonist was not aware of the plot, had no sense of direction, and did not know what she was doing.
I time-traveled when I was thirteen, so I stopped watching because I didn't feel like I was immersed in it.
A 13-year-old who travels back in time is basically the same as aboriginals. Moreover, a 13-year-old child who has not studied much and has no relatives has not developed his basic outlook on life. It is boring to travel back in time and be like aboriginals in the past few years. It is better to write about the time after 20 years old. After all, the basic outlook on life of a 20-year-old in my country is very correct.
Wearing it round after round is very tiring.
There is no real world, it's all about wearing clothes, which makes me a little tired. The author has written every world well. I just can't set up a main world.
Swordsman Sword Network Sanmingjiao, Ba Dao, Cangyun
Talk about your feelings
If I am in such a situation, being framed and hunted by others, if I don't die, then when I have the power to traverse the world, I will kill them one by one, cut off their inheritance, and eliminate their descendants. I don't want to take the initiative to harm others, but if others want to harm me, I will pay back ten times or a hundred times.
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I have read this book before, and I saw it was put down by the apprentice of the ancestor of the Blood Knife. Later, I saw a friend recommend it, and I saw a few Amway patches. After trying it, I felt it was okay. Unlimited martial arts flow. The protagonist is reborn in the world of Lianchengjue and becomes the disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor. He goes out and gets involved in the struggle between Ling Tuisi and Wan Zhenshan. After killing Ling Tuisi, he is hunted down. Like the original work, he joins forces with the Blood Knife Ancestor to fight Nansiqi on the snowy mountain. After that, the master and apprentice finally win the battle by luck. Then he entered the world of Swordsman and was involved in the Golden Pen Washing Hands incident. Entrusted by Mr. Mo Da, he rescued the Liu Qu family. After his martial arts progressed, he faced off against Zuo Lengchan and entered the Five Mountains Merger Incident. Why read this book: Although Jin Yong's colleagues are not as extinct as they were during the crackdown two years ago, there are still not many people who dare to write about it, and there are even fewer of them that can be read. This is one of them. The author's writing style is good, with a strong martial arts flavor. Combining some characteristics of Jin Yong and Gu Long, the effect is not bad. The Liancheng Jue chapter is relatively average, but the flavor of the Swordsman of Jianghu chapter feels good. Why not read this book: The protagonist is set to be a gangster whose parents have died and makes a living by cheating and kidnapping. He travels through time at the age of thirteen and worships the Blood Sword Ancestor as his teacher. He is basically like most of the natives. To be honest, this kind of character is very unpleasant. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is said to be both good and evil, but his acting style often feels inconsistent, and this is most obvious in the Liancheng Jue chapter. The author is deeply influenced by the old martial arts. Many choices in the plot are actually not the kind that most online readers like. I need to be mentally prepared before reading this. Finally, I personally like fanfics where the protagonist doesn't know the plot of the original work, because it allows the protagonist to figure out his own plan to pass the level without using the best choices along the way. However, in this book's Liancheng Jue chapter, I still chose to rely on the plot, and I tied up Shui Sheng and fled to the snowy mountains to fight Nansi Qi to the death. This setting has no merit for me. Also, the storyline related to Shui Sheng seems to be a bit hypocritical for the protagonist. Generally speaking, between grain and grass-to grain and grass, the evaluation will be revised depending on the situation in the future.
My current favorite martial arts fanfic. The image of the supporting characters has not collapsed. I originally disliked the fact that the male protagonist was apprenticed to the Blood Sword Ancestor for being too low, but I didn't expect... The male protagonist was not low, but the Blood Sword Ancestor was still very low. The first world is Liancheng Jue. The second world is Swordsman. The third world is Xiao Shiyilang. As an aside, in the world of martial arts, the heavenly descending type is definitely better than the childhood sweetheart type. Look at how sweet Brother Chong and Saint Aunt are, but the bamboo horse type is as bitter as in Lianchengjue.
The first sword, very cool and beautiful, with a Jianghu atmosphere, a time-travel story in the martial arts world, Blood Sword Ancestor's Apprentice, later traveled through Swordsman, Liancheng Jue, and is now in Tian Long Ba Bu. I wrote a new book to participate in Gu Long's activities. It has been there for several months. I don't know if it will be updated, but I still think this first sword is very good.
Although it is Jin Yong, it has more Cologne flavor. He became a disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor and had a deep relationship with him. In the end, he was trapped in the snowy mountains and fought with each other for survival supplies.
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