Start Plundering from Yangshen

After reading so many stories about traveling to Yangshen, this is the first time I have seen one with such low combat power.

The writing is really bad, you are writing fan fiction, but every time you return to the world of Yangshen, your writing is like rubbish, watching Hong Yi pretending to be cool, doing nothing, and being more of a supporting role than a supporting role. Are you the protagonist or someone else is the protagonist? Just hang out there, even though you are already strong, but in the end, you look like a **, and you get scared when you see a woman. I will say it bluntly, there is no system, it is nothing, it is just a supporting role, and it can't survive more than three chapters.

Why doesn't the martial arts obtained through time travel indicate what the state will be like at the time of Yang Shen? A low-level martial artist

I died of poison in Chapter 17. As expected, I can only persist in Chapter 17...

Why do people who have practiced menstruation still lose their temper when faced with beautiful women, such as swallowing saliva...

To live through the Song Dynasty without rebelling, a chrysanthemum is used as an electric drill

I just read it, the writing is poor, and the writing is not careful enough. It's like a composition written by a primary school student riding a horse. If you want to write, write it well. Don't waste time on the protagonist. Everything is focused on improving your cultivation. Also, write all aspects clearly, and write some small details carefully.

It feels like it's for travel, the system is being used as a piggy bank, and the writing on it doesn't even know it's a ghost!

What are you writing? At this level, you still write books like others.

Can you write about Wu Tomb? There are a lot of good things in it, such as the eternal sky boat, eternal lotus seeds, and various spiritual roots of heaven and earth.