
Check in in a Perfect World
About This Novel
Check in in front of Ishimura Liushen and get the reward of the innate holy fetus. Check in at Virtual God Realm and receive a reward cross-border talisman, which can randomly travel to other worlds. Check in at Tianshen Academy, get rewarded calligraphy tips, break through the world's limits at speed, and evolve over time. Checking in in the Immortal Realm, you will be rewarded with the magic of freedom. He will transform into freedom, he will transform into eternity, he will transform into time, he will transform into reincarnation... Entering the perfect world, Shi Zhong will get the punch-in system and become a member of the Stone Village. From then on, the footprints of Shi Zhong were all left in the eight lower realms, three thousand states, nine heavens and ten lands, the immortal realm and the sea.
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Thoughts after viewing
It's a perfect copy of the perfect world, but with the addition of an extra person and a useless system. Shi Hao's opportunities have come to you over and over again. If you remove Shi Hao and remove the system, isn't this a perfect world? What I have seen is not interesting, and what I have not seen is not interesting either. It lacks the original emotional journey.
How to win in battle
The fighting method is not that strong. But it was created by a great emperor. How strong can it be. At most, it can only simulate the secret method of the Great Emperor or below. Some authors have written that it can simulate the Immortal King's method and the Immortal Emperor's method. It really poisoned me. And the Immortal Emperor is not that powerful. Daluo Jinxian level can close the timeline. Emperor Huangtian can also be hunted by people across the long river of time. Every comment section is full of comments and curses. To see who is stronger, you have to compare the original Buddha and the perfect original. Don't look at some fans from the Great Desolate World and those from Perfect Zhetian who are scolding here. Don't compare with fans, directly compare with the original work.
Cute new writing!
The author is a newbie reading the article for the first time. If the writing is not good, I hope you guys will bear with me and point it out. The author will hear your opinions. [Emot=default,07/]
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Shutting up the liver essence is also called world ethics
First of all, the prehistoric world does not belong to any world. It was created from the world of chaos. What is the understanding of chaos? Chaos is the beginning of "beginning". There is also the mythical Pangu, who was originally called the Primordial Heavenly Lord. The Lord of all things determines the arrival of a beginning. Outside the chaotic world and the prehistoric world, there are small thousand worlds and great thousand worlds. Here, because of Buddhism, one flower, one bodhi, one leaf, one world, the prehistoric world has arrived. With the Golden Immortal, you can open up the world and replace the Dao of Heaven with the spiritual consciousness or origin of the Hunyuan Golden Immortal. This also explains: "Why the big and small worlds cannot understand the Dao and can only understand the Dao and the legal system. There is no Dao in this world." And who said that the prehistoric saints have come to an end? I'm afraid you haven't seen the Great Desolation and understood the myths, right? Hunyuan is just the beginning, Tai Chi is just the beginning, Wuji is just progress, and Hunyuan Golden Immortal can give you a saint. People may wonder: "What is a saint? It sounds like a jobber of the way of heaven, but it sounds like Hongmeng Ziqi." Reason: "This is the retreat of the great way, the management system of the way of heaven, just like your boss, he can't make you better than him, so if you can't cultivate the way, you can only follow the way of heaven." What is passed down to cultivate the three corpses is the law of heaven that prevents them from transcending Hunyuan. To put it simply, what is cultivated is not the spiritual energy of chaos but the innate spiritual energy. You can't get out of chaos until you are a quasi-sage!" Let me add one more thing to shut you up. What is cultivating the Tao, cultivating immortals, and cultivating gods: "The Tao is the great road that cannot be cultivated in the non-chaos world. The following worlds are just Tao and laws, that is, the prehistoric human world and the earth. This is the reason for cultivating the Tao."
⊙∀⊙!
The Immortal Peak is proud of time. With me, An Lan, there will be heaven.
Come on it's not bad
How should I put it? You can read it if you are not interested in reading it. They are all fan fiction, so there is no need to worry about it, and there is no need to take it seriously. Why do we read fan fiction? Not for those regrets? Don't you need to feel refreshed? Come on, the author is writing a book about his unknown later years, which is pretty good! This is the only fan book among them, and it also includes "From a Perfect World" and a "Suddenly Invincible" spoiled by the title of the book. It is well written. Compared to other fan books about old red hair, this one is really okay.
There are many perfect fans, and these are the best ones.
I've read a lot of perfect fanfics before, and they were either poorly written or outright eunuchs. Like this one, the writing is good, the number of words is relatively large, and the ones that insist on being updated are really excellent. Then there is some advice. The protagonist should still retain his gratitude to the people of Shicun, but don't invest so much emotion in Shicun and Shi Hao. The people of Shicun will die sooner or later. If love comes to an end, not only will the protagonist be restrained in his actions, but the death of the people of Shicun will be even more painful, and he does not want to see the protagonist live like Shi Hao's nanny. Let the protagonist be a little colder.
Level of the Ninth Secret
Don't write the Nine Secrets too powerfully. The Emperor who covers the sky cannot be compared to the Immortal King or the quasi-Immortal Emperor even against the sky. If the nine complete nine secrets are combined into one, it should be regarded as the level of the ten evil treasures, and if a single nine secrets are combined, it should be regarded as the level of the ten evil Sanshou. This is my own opinion. I don't know if it's right or not. I just write down my own thoughts. Don't scold me if I'm wrong. After all, I haven't read the original work. I like to read fan fiction
Confused
How did Liu Shen know that the Three Light Divine Water in the prehistoric world was so poisonous?
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Official(289)Scraped 26d ago
Thoughts after viewing
It's a perfect copy of the perfect world, but with the addition of an extra person and a useless system. Shi Hao's opportunities have come to you over and over again. If you remove Shi Hao and remove the system, isn't this a perfect world? What I have seen is not interesting, and what I have not seen is not interesting either. It lacks the original emotional journey.
How to win in battle
The fighting method is not that strong. But it was created by a great emperor. How strong can it be. At most, it can only simulate the secret method of the Great Emperor or below. Some authors have written that it can simulate the Immortal King's method and the Immortal Emperor's method. It really poisoned me. And the Immortal Emperor is not that powerful. Daluo Jinxian level can close the timeline. Emperor Huangtian can also be hunted by people across the long river of time. Every comment section is full of comments and curses. To see who is stronger, you have to compare the original Buddha and the perfect original. Don't look at some fans from the Great Desolate World and those from Perfect Zhetian who are scolding here. Don't compare with fans, directly compare with the original work.
Cute new writing!
The author is a newbie reading the article for the first time. If the writing is not good, I hope you guys will bear with me and point it out. The author will hear your opinions. [Emot=default,07/]
Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire
Water water water water water water crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire crystal fire
Shutting up the liver essence is also called world ethics
First of all, the prehistoric world does not belong to any world. It was created from the world of chaos. What is the understanding of chaos? Chaos is the beginning of "beginning". There is also the mythical Pangu, who was originally called the Primordial Heavenly Lord. The Lord of all things determines the arrival of a beginning. Outside the chaotic world and the prehistoric world, there are small thousand worlds and great thousand worlds. Here, because of Buddhism, one flower, one bodhi, one leaf, one world, the prehistoric world has arrived. With the Golden Immortal, you can open up the world and replace the Dao of Heaven with the spiritual consciousness or origin of the Hunyuan Golden Immortal. This also explains: "Why the big and small worlds cannot understand the Dao and can only understand the Dao and the legal system. There is no Dao in this world." And who said that the prehistoric saints have come to an end? I'm afraid you haven't seen the Great Desolation and understood the myths, right? Hunyuan is just the beginning, Tai Chi is just the beginning, Wuji is just progress, and Hunyuan Golden Immortal can give you a saint. People may wonder: "What is a saint? It sounds like a jobber of the way of heaven, but it sounds like Hongmeng Ziqi." Reason: "This is the retreat of the great way, the management system of the way of heaven, just like your boss, he can't make you better than him, so if you can't cultivate the way, you can only follow the way of heaven." What is passed down to cultivate the three corpses is the law of heaven that prevents them from transcending Hunyuan. To put it simply, what is cultivated is not the spiritual energy of chaos but the innate spiritual energy. You can't get out of chaos until you are a quasi-sage!" Let me add one more thing to shut you up. What is cultivating the Tao, cultivating immortals, and cultivating gods: "The Tao is the great road that cannot be cultivated in the non-chaos world. The following worlds are just Tao and laws, that is, the prehistoric human world and the earth. This is the reason for cultivating the Tao."
⊙∀⊙!
The Immortal Peak is proud of time. With me, An Lan, there will be heaven.
Come on it's not bad
How should I put it? You can read it if you are not interested in reading it. They are all fan fiction, so there is no need to worry about it, and there is no need to take it seriously. Why do we read fan fiction? Not for those regrets? Don't you need to feel refreshed? Come on, the author is writing a book about his unknown later years, which is pretty good! This is the only fan book among them, and it also includes "From a Perfect World" and a "Suddenly Invincible" spoiled by the title of the book. It is well written. Compared to other fan books about old red hair, this one is really okay.
There are many perfect fans, and these are the best ones.
I've read a lot of perfect fanfics before, and they were either poorly written or outright eunuchs. Like this one, the writing is good, the number of words is relatively large, and the ones that insist on being updated are really excellent. Then there is some advice. The protagonist should still retain his gratitude to the people of Shicun, but don't invest so much emotion in Shicun and Shi Hao. The people of Shicun will die sooner or later. If love comes to an end, not only will the protagonist be restrained in his actions, but the death of the people of Shicun will be even more painful, and he does not want to see the protagonist live like Shi Hao's nanny. Let the protagonist be a little colder.
Level of the Ninth Secret
Don't write the Nine Secrets too powerfully. The Emperor who covers the sky cannot be compared to the Immortal King or the quasi-Immortal Emperor even against the sky. If the nine complete nine secrets are combined into one, it should be regarded as the level of the ten evil treasures, and if a single nine secrets are combined, it should be regarded as the level of the ten evil Sanshou. This is my own opinion. I don't know if it's right or not. I just write down my own thoughts. Don't scold me if I'm wrong. After all, I haven't read the original work. I like to read fan fiction
Confused
How did Liu Shen know that the Three Light Divine Water in the prehistoric world was so poisonous?














