The God Who Travels between Two Worlds
About This Novel
"The Great Luo Immortal Who Started from the Side Door" recommends a new book. Introduction: After receiving a grain of magical power and a single thought, the order of heaven and earth will be lost, the sun and moon will be out of order, people will confuse right and wrong, and confuse black and white, which is called the reverse journey of time and the reversal of heaven and earth. When the mythology travels through the heavens, its reputation spreads to all directions, the ending is reversed, changes come and go, and immortality is achieved through magical powers, and it is called the Great Luo Tianzun.
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Official(7)Scraped 24d ago
Directly written in reality, this extraordinary book was thrown into the street, or it mutated when I encountered it. Idiot plot
I looked at a few pictures and couldn't stand them anymore. I was able to open up a false cave after just a few days of practice. I couldn't understand them.
The beginning is good, but the rest is boring. What I read in the novel is the story, but the rest is not interesting at all.
Make some comments
After reading it roughly, the author is still very careful. But I suggest that authors try not to write about China, because it is easy to get blocked. It would also be good to write as much as possible about foreign countries and open a few more vests to have a global competition. Another thing is that the author should not get too hung up on the setting. Just like the chapters about the manifestation of the saints, there is no need to write in such detail about the Taoist priest's yang and yin. Just write about a cultivator, don't make it too complicated. As for promoting the plot to gain faith, the best way is always to have a hero appear during a crisis. The protagonist uses more vests and arranges more monsters to rescue people on a large scale.
Porters from both worlds?
? ? ? Are you a book lover? Your subject seems similar.
The subject matter is good, but the pace is a bit too big. I don't know if I can control the rhythm.
I don't know if this looks good or not. I think Wen Chaogong looks better.
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 24d ago
Directly written in reality, this extraordinary book was thrown into the street, or it mutated when I encountered it. Idiot plot
I looked at a few pictures and couldn't stand them anymore. I was able to open up a false cave after just a few days of practice. I couldn't understand them.
The beginning is good, but the rest is boring. What I read in the novel is the story, but the rest is not interesting at all.
Make some comments
After reading it roughly, the author is still very careful. But I suggest that authors try not to write about China, because it is easy to get blocked. It would also be good to write as much as possible about foreign countries and open a few more vests to have a global competition. Another thing is that the author should not get too hung up on the setting. Just like the chapters about the manifestation of the saints, there is no need to write in such detail about the Taoist priest's yang and yin. Just write about a cultivator, don't make it too complicated. As for promoting the plot to gain faith, the best way is always to have a hero appear during a crisis. The protagonist uses more vests and arranges more monsters to rescue people on a large scale.
Porters from both worlds?
? ? ? Are you a book lover? Your subject seems similar.
The subject matter is good, but the pace is a bit too big. I don't know if I can control the rhythm.
I don't know if this looks good or not. I think Wen Chaogong looks better.
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