
Thief
by Gunner No. 1
About This Novel
This is the story of a guy who had a shady background and could only live in hiding. After being hunted countless times, he drew his sword and counterattacked. Finally, he became a rich and handsome man, married Bai Fumei, and reached the pinnacle of his life.
What Readers Think
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Official(5)Scraped 20d ago
The author's story is very good, but as a current online novel, the writing technique is a bit outdated, and the novel is somewhat indifferent. There are too many pens for secondary characters and foreshadowing, which weakens the tension of the novel. The author's characterization of the novel is relatively successful, but the author portrays too many characters, and the protagonist is weakened. Moreover, due to the constant portrayal of various characters in the novel, the novel is relatively loose and becomes a group novel. And group novels are the least attractive among online articles. Anyway, I am an old bookworm. Generally speaking, when you see group portrait novels, you will directly read them, including live streaming novels and unlimited streaming novels. However, the author's writing style is quite good, but the writing style is not in line with the current situation.
Updates are starting:), I've been following the Gunner's book, and I'll reserve a spot for the five stars.
The author's name is useless
Look at the names of these people, especially those in the grassland. What are their names? And are some of the names taken from Ping Zong Xia Ying? They called Zhan Tai Mieming to destroy the Ming Dynasty. There is no Ming Dynasty in your book, so it feels awkward no matter how you do it. The other names don't feel like normal names. Overall it's okay, but there's nothing exciting about it
When can I write another novel like Pawn?
When can I be as emotional as a pawn, with vivid characters, passionate war scenes, and ups and downs of the story, twists and turns? The pawn is really beautiful. .
Reply to questions from book friends about the two most recent chapters
One: Xia Houjun went to find Li Ru after learning that Zhao Ning was dead and allowed himself to be captured: it was not that Xia Houjun had a problem with his IQ, but that he could not imagine that Li Ru would do anything to him. One thing everyone should pay attention to is that Li Ru and Xia Houjun are comrades who have fought side by side for more than ten years, and Zhao Ning is Li Ru's nephew. Xia Houjun thinks that Li Ru has been deceived by Zhao Kuan, so he needs to inform Li Ru of this and ask Li Ru to launch a large-scale attack to avenge Zhao Ning. In fact, Li Ru had no intention of taking action against Xia Houjun. In fact, he had already agreed to Xia Houjun's request. It was Li Chengde who was recovering from injuries in Li Ru's army who suddenly took down Xiahou Jun without any warning in advance. This was just a temporary decision made by Li Chengde after learning about Zhao Ning's death. Second: Questions about Zhao Cheng being plotted by Li Wan: 1. At this time, Zhao Cheng did not know that Zhao Ning was dead, and would a husband guard against his wife like an enemy? When he goes to the back house to meet his wife and celebrate his daughter's birthday, will he bring a lot of guards with him? What's more, he himself is a master of refining gods and transforming emptiness. 2. Zhao Cheng, a person who is so confident to the point of arrogance and feels that he can control everything, deep down in his heart does not think that Li Wan dares to betray him. There are many hints in the previous article. For example, it is said that Li Wan is called Zhao Li many times, and that Li Wan's prosperity and wealth are bound to him, Zhao Cheng. So when he was plotted against, he couldn't believe it. As for the warning, when the poisoned Zhao Cheng faced Li Chengde, another master of spiritual transformation, he had no chance. 3. There are many examples in history of high-ranking people being killed by their relatives. For example, Zhu Wen was killed by his son Zhu Youzhen. Zhu Wen is still the emperor!
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 20d ago
The author's story is very good, but as a current online novel, the writing technique is a bit outdated, and the novel is somewhat indifferent. There are too many pens for secondary characters and foreshadowing, which weakens the tension of the novel. The author's characterization of the novel is relatively successful, but the author portrays too many characters, and the protagonist is weakened. Moreover, due to the constant portrayal of various characters in the novel, the novel is relatively loose and becomes a group novel. And group novels are the least attractive among online articles. Anyway, I am an old bookworm. Generally speaking, when you see group portrait novels, you will directly read them, including live streaming novels and unlimited streaming novels. However, the author's writing style is quite good, but the writing style is not in line with the current situation.
Updates are starting:), I've been following the Gunner's book, and I'll reserve a spot for the five stars.
The author's name is useless
Look at the names of these people, especially those in the grassland. What are their names? And are some of the names taken from Ping Zong Xia Ying? They called Zhan Tai Mieming to destroy the Ming Dynasty. There is no Ming Dynasty in your book, so it feels awkward no matter how you do it. The other names don't feel like normal names. Overall it's okay, but there's nothing exciting about it
When can I write another novel like Pawn?
When can I be as emotional as a pawn, with vivid characters, passionate war scenes, and ups and downs of the story, twists and turns? The pawn is really beautiful. .
Reply to questions from book friends about the two most recent chapters
One: Xia Houjun went to find Li Ru after learning that Zhao Ning was dead and allowed himself to be captured: it was not that Xia Houjun had a problem with his IQ, but that he could not imagine that Li Ru would do anything to him. One thing everyone should pay attention to is that Li Ru and Xia Houjun are comrades who have fought side by side for more than ten years, and Zhao Ning is Li Ru's nephew. Xia Houjun thinks that Li Ru has been deceived by Zhao Kuan, so he needs to inform Li Ru of this and ask Li Ru to launch a large-scale attack to avenge Zhao Ning. In fact, Li Ru had no intention of taking action against Xia Houjun. In fact, he had already agreed to Xia Houjun's request. It was Li Chengde who was recovering from injuries in Li Ru's army who suddenly took down Xiahou Jun without any warning in advance. This was just a temporary decision made by Li Chengde after learning about Zhao Ning's death. Second: Questions about Zhao Cheng being plotted by Li Wan: 1. At this time, Zhao Cheng did not know that Zhao Ning was dead, and would a husband guard against his wife like an enemy? When he goes to the back house to meet his wife and celebrate his daughter's birthday, will he bring a lot of guards with him? What's more, he himself is a master of refining gods and transforming emptiness. 2. Zhao Cheng, a person who is so confident to the point of arrogance and feels that he can control everything, deep down in his heart does not think that Li Wan dares to betray him. There are many hints in the previous article. For example, it is said that Li Wan is called Zhao Li many times, and that Li Wan's prosperity and wealth are bound to him, Zhao Cheng. So when he was plotted against, he couldn't believe it. As for the warning, when the poisoned Zhao Cheng faced Li Chengde, another master of spiritual transformation, he had no chance. 3. There are many examples in history of high-ranking people being killed by their relatives. For example, Zhu Wen was killed by his son Zhu Youzhen. Zhu Wen is still the emperor!









