
The Royal Family's Hegemony in Water Margin
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The author Jun is busy making money. Updates were resumed before 8 months ago, but the plot is still not pleasing to the eye.
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
I've read a lot and they all say it's watery.
This book is actually not good at all. I tried it myself for more than 30 chapters and found that the author just made the protagonist go to the Song Dynasty and be ignorant of the world and encountered difficulties at every turn. The writing was too detailed and gave people a sense of weakness. There is no other Water Margin that has the toughness and the pleasure of accepting heroes wherever they go.
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
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mess
I will just say a few words. A time-travelling character behaves like this. He is a bitch but still builds a memorial arch. He collects wanted criminals but still becomes a bandit. Didn't he say at the beginning that everyone has entered Liangshan? In the end, they actually said that they didn't enter Liangshan, but built a village. And if I remember correctly, the protagonist's room was built in Liangshan. As a result, just anyone can get in. Later, they also said that the house was not in Liangshan, but it was crazy to put it in the village. I could understand it at first, but as it turned out, the writing became more and more confusing, and I got into trouble a lot. Not talking about knowledge or anything. A modern person can't fool an ancient person. I really doubt that the protagonist was a fool before time travel. What's more, a college graduate is as stupid as a pig. Get out of the pit. Goodbye!
Don't know how to say
The author makes the protagonist look like a weak brother, and writes other historical figures in too much detail. Are you just trying to make up for the word count? If you don't say that it is interconnected, it just doesn't make people want to read it. The more I read, the more irritated I become. Yours is more like a business novel. Rebellion? Rebellion happens spontaneously! I looked at it until more than 700 chapters before there was a lot of fighting, forgetting about doing business, there were still some unrealistic ideas, and there were also people's squares and square dances! If the Song Dynasty could still be so stable, where do you think your rebellion came from? Also engaged in real estate! ! ! Sky. What are you writing about? Is this what armed groups are like? I don't want to say more! Boring! !
Continue writing
I suggest you, the author, continue writing your story of survival in the Water Margin. The level of that one is much higher than this one!
I read 700 chapters and I can't understand it.
I've read it before chapter 700, and I think it's okay. After all, the protagonist wants to recruit a younger brother, go deep into the grassroots society, and accumulate strength. But I couldn't stand it anymore, even after killing the eunuch Li Yan. I don't know how the author wrote it. It's illogical. Do you really think that the ancients were all fools, and that you can take advantage of the ancients with a smooth tongue? The layout of the book is completely incomprehensible. I don't understand strategic development.
What are you writing about waiting for something?
Where is this all going? I'm totally confused. Can't read
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
Not good, not good
There is no breaking point of conflict, and it is easy for people to watch it.
Passing by? ? ? ?
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
I've read a lot and they all say it's watery.
This book is actually not good at all. I tried it myself for more than 30 chapters and found that the author just made the protagonist go to the Song Dynasty and be ignorant of the world and encountered difficulties at every turn. The writing was too detailed and gave people a sense of weakness. There is no other Water Margin that has the toughness and the pleasure of accepting heroes wherever they go.
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
mess
I will just say a few words. A time-travelling character behaves like this. He is a bitch but still builds a memorial arch. He collects wanted criminals but still becomes a bandit. Didn't he say at the beginning that everyone has entered Liangshan? In the end, they actually said that they didn't enter Liangshan, but built a village. And if I remember correctly, the protagonist's room was built in Liangshan. As a result, just anyone can get in. Later, they also said that the house was not in Liangshan, but it was crazy to put it in the village. I could understand it at first, but as it turned out, the writing became more and more confusing, and I got into trouble a lot. Not talking about knowledge or anything. A modern person can't fool an ancient person. I really doubt that the protagonist was a fool before time travel. What's more, a college graduate is as stupid as a pig. Get out of the pit. Goodbye!
Don't know how to say
The author makes the protagonist look like a weak brother, and writes other historical figures in too much detail. Are you just trying to make up for the word count? If you don't say that it is interconnected, it just doesn't make people want to read it. The more I read, the more irritated I become. Yours is more like a business novel. Rebellion? Rebellion happens spontaneously! I looked at it until more than 700 chapters before there was a lot of fighting, forgetting about doing business, there were still some unrealistic ideas, and there were also people's squares and square dances! If the Song Dynasty could still be so stable, where do you think your rebellion came from? Also engaged in real estate! ! ! Sky. What are you writing about? Is this what armed groups are like? I don't want to say more! Boring! !
Continue writing
I suggest you, the author, continue writing your story of survival in the Water Margin. The level of that one is much higher than this one!
I read 700 chapters and I can't understand it.
I've read it before chapter 700, and I think it's okay. After all, the protagonist wants to recruit a younger brother, go deep into the grassroots society, and accumulate strength. But I couldn't stand it anymore, even after killing the eunuch Li Yan. I don't know how the author wrote it. It's illogical. Do you really think that the ancients were all fools, and that you can take advantage of the ancients with a smooth tongue? The layout of the book is completely incomprehensible. I don't understand strategic development.
What are you writing about waiting for something?
Where is this all going? I'm totally confused. Can't read
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
Give me a thumbs up... Come on! ! !
Not good, not good
There is no breaking point of conflict, and it is easy for people to watch it.
Passing by? ? ? ?









