
I Am a Summoner in Douluo World
by Death Chant
About This Novel
Liu Xinghan traveled to Douluo Continent with the system, and his goal was to defeat Tang San and save Wuhun Palace. Liu Xinghan: Wuhun Palace will be even more glorious because of me! A new book is released, (The Peerless Tang Sect: The King of Hundred Transformations)
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Official(398)Scraped 11d ago
When did Liu Erlong become the Fire Dragon Spirit? Don't change it randomly. Also, the protagonist is a bit too strong and makes Tang San a waste. This is a bit boring. After all, others are also children of fate. If you write it like this, who else can fight him in the later stage?
To be honest, joining Wuhun Palace is stupid.
Qian Renxue and Hu Liena are two big scams. Pope Bibi Dong is crazy and adds enemy resources. Even if he becomes a villain, he is still his own gravedigger. To be honest, Wuhun Palace did not lose unjustly, so if you still join Wuhun Palace after knowing it, I think you are joking with your own life. If you are from Wuhun Palace, I think you can gather a group of people and directly leave Wuhun Palace to form your own force during the later war. You can either take your relatives and friends to break away from the power later. Of course, mainland China pays attention to family background. If you have capital, you can pay a certain price to leave the Wuhun Palace openly. If you don't have it, you can also set up a situation to leave. Don't talk about trying to influence Bibi Dong. It is unrealistic to pick up Qian Renxue and Hu Liena. After all, people are unpredictable, so you might as well get yourself involved. There are many mainland women who like women. Their temperament may not be as good as Bibi Dong Qian Renxue Hu Liena, but there should be many who are no worse than her in appearance. Also, it is not recommended to join Shrek or other forces. After all, many people who have traveled through time do not like to be inferior to others. There is also the issue of three views. Even if you adapt to a world where strength is respected, don't say that unification is good for the mainland because it is not realistic. And as a time traveler, don't you want to go to a higher plane? Don't you want to see the hundreds of tribes standing in the forest? Don't you want to see the Tianjiao of the hundreds of tribes? Don't you want to become the most powerful person in the world, become the invincible, ascend to immortality, fight with the sky, and become the master? Thinking about it makes you passionate, but you can only think about it.
Say a few more words
In fact, I better understand the psychology of you authors who arrange card level settings. They are afraid that the protagonist is a titled Douluo, and the people of the same age are children of level 30 or 40, which will easily lead to failure in writing. It's very hard to have a hangup yourself, and it's very hard to develop in a wretched way. This enters another strange circle. You can't talk about the hangup too much, but you must also keep a low profile. The card level setting was born. Kavin inevitably appeared because I couldn't continue editing... If you think about it differently, since it's not easy to get along with your peers when you're strong, then why not get along with strong people? Compete with Chen Xin, practice with Yue Guan, or simply take a spiritual test. There are many plots...
nice
Squeeze out Tang San's opportunities bit by bit. Preventing him from awakening the Blue Silver Emperor. Let him practice his second martial soul and weaken his talent. Prevent God from choosing him.
Do you know why you are stuck?
I have read no less than 200 Douluo fanfics, and those that frequently have to level up, compress soul power, and lay a solid foundation, can range from being stuck to being in the palace. Do you know why? Because the card level setting is not included in the original work, adding a training system to it requires relatively good writing skills. Once your writing skills are insufficient, you will not be able to write anymore. It is recommended that you give up this seemingly reasonable setting and write it according to the original setting. Can't an 18-year-old titled Douluo do it?
This book is full of poison at first glance.
The Soul Sect also wants to defeat the century-old dark gold-clawed bear, but he may not be able to even break the skin. A hundred-year-old dark gold fear claw can easily defeat a ten-thousand-year-old soul beast.
Classic taunting start He started poisoning when he entered the academy. There are many small poison points. For example, the small poison point of finding an unknown person to sell elixirs at the beginning is not a big problem. We can assume that he has lived in modern times for a long time and has no experience in killing people and grabbing treasures. But when he met Qian Renxue (blonde beauty + angel spirit + Qian Xue's name), he didn't recognize him and looked incredible when he came to the worship hall. It was considered a small poison. , Later on, because of his big nerve, he refused to repent when he encountered danger several times. I said at the beginning that he had never encountered danger, but he was targeted and almost killed and had his bones taken. Later, he went to trouble Tang San, and called away Xiao Tao, the only trump card around him who could protect him. Idiots are full of establishments. Secondly, if they want to collect Gu Gubo and kidnap someone's granddaughter and force him, it's okay. If you give your own person a hundred-year soul bone, it's outrageous. At least give it a thousand years. Then he forcibly developed an outrageous branch line for the relationship between Pig's Foot and Liu Erlong's entire aunt: using his own aunt as bait to bring down the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex. Because of this, Pig's Knuckle has completely different personalities. If you say he is good, he will not do anything about human affairs. If you say he is bad, he will be compassionate and want to save the world, but he is not a character who bears infamy for the world. This is one-tenth of my experience. I don't know what to write about it later.
On the modification of classic settings
Now that I have seen Chapter 14 of Gengxin City, the first thing is the question of Qian Renxue's level in Wuhun Palace, level 50? Author, don't you think it's outrageous? Qian Renxue went to the Tiandou Empire as an undercover agent when she was nine years old, so she is not level 50 at the age of nine? Grade 10 in one year? So awesome? The second problem is that the protagonist cannot recognize Qian Renxue's intelligence. Wuhundian's surname Qianfa is very beautiful, and he also said that his name is Qianxue. All the elements are given, so you can't guess that this is not a pure forced intelligence? There is also the issue of the protagonist's family background. In Chapter 6, it is mentioned that several generations of their ancestors have worked for the Wuhun Palace. By Chapter 14, when the thunder strike is launched, the father transforms into a young master who defected from the family for love in a vulgar drama. . . . And he had avoided talking about his life experience before. . . . . 6Author, do you have an outline? Let me ask you, do you have an outline? Why do you still think that once it comes out, it comes out all at once?
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Official(398)Scraped 11d ago
When did Liu Erlong become the Fire Dragon Spirit? Don't change it randomly. Also, the protagonist is a bit too strong and makes Tang San a waste. This is a bit boring. After all, others are also children of fate. If you write it like this, who else can fight him in the later stage?
To be honest, joining Wuhun Palace is stupid.
Qian Renxue and Hu Liena are two big scams. Pope Bibi Dong is crazy and adds enemy resources. Even if he becomes a villain, he is still his own gravedigger. To be honest, Wuhun Palace did not lose unjustly, so if you still join Wuhun Palace after knowing it, I think you are joking with your own life. If you are from Wuhun Palace, I think you can gather a group of people and directly leave Wuhun Palace to form your own force during the later war. You can either take your relatives and friends to break away from the power later. Of course, mainland China pays attention to family background. If you have capital, you can pay a certain price to leave the Wuhun Palace openly. If you don't have it, you can also set up a situation to leave. Don't talk about trying to influence Bibi Dong. It is unrealistic to pick up Qian Renxue and Hu Liena. After all, people are unpredictable, so you might as well get yourself involved. There are many mainland women who like women. Their temperament may not be as good as Bibi Dong Qian Renxue Hu Liena, but there should be many who are no worse than her in appearance. Also, it is not recommended to join Shrek or other forces. After all, many people who have traveled through time do not like to be inferior to others. There is also the issue of three views. Even if you adapt to a world where strength is respected, don't say that unification is good for the mainland because it is not realistic. And as a time traveler, don't you want to go to a higher plane? Don't you want to see the hundreds of tribes standing in the forest? Don't you want to see the Tianjiao of the hundreds of tribes? Don't you want to become the most powerful person in the world, become the invincible, ascend to immortality, fight with the sky, and become the master? Thinking about it makes you passionate, but you can only think about it.
Say a few more words
In fact, I better understand the psychology of you authors who arrange card level settings. They are afraid that the protagonist is a titled Douluo, and the people of the same age are children of level 30 or 40, which will easily lead to failure in writing. It's very hard to have a hangup yourself, and it's very hard to develop in a wretched way. This enters another strange circle. You can't talk about the hangup too much, but you must also keep a low profile. The card level setting was born. Kavin inevitably appeared because I couldn't continue editing... If you think about it differently, since it's not easy to get along with your peers when you're strong, then why not get along with strong people? Compete with Chen Xin, practice with Yue Guan, or simply take a spiritual test. There are many plots...
nice
Squeeze out Tang San's opportunities bit by bit. Preventing him from awakening the Blue Silver Emperor. Let him practice his second martial soul and weaken his talent. Prevent God from choosing him.
Do you know why you are stuck?
I have read no less than 200 Douluo fanfics, and those that frequently have to level up, compress soul power, and lay a solid foundation, can range from being stuck to being in the palace. Do you know why? Because the card level setting is not included in the original work, adding a training system to it requires relatively good writing skills. Once your writing skills are insufficient, you will not be able to write anymore. It is recommended that you give up this seemingly reasonable setting and write it according to the original setting. Can't an 18-year-old titled Douluo do it?
This book is full of poison at first glance.
The Soul Sect also wants to defeat the century-old dark gold-clawed bear, but he may not be able to even break the skin. A hundred-year-old dark gold fear claw can easily defeat a ten-thousand-year-old soul beast.
Classic taunting start He started poisoning when he entered the academy. There are many small poison points. For example, the small poison point of finding an unknown person to sell elixirs at the beginning is not a big problem. We can assume that he has lived in modern times for a long time and has no experience in killing people and grabbing treasures. But when he met Qian Renxue (blonde beauty + angel spirit + Qian Xue's name), he didn't recognize him and looked incredible when he came to the worship hall. It was considered a small poison. , Later on, because of his big nerve, he refused to repent when he encountered danger several times. I said at the beginning that he had never encountered danger, but he was targeted and almost killed and had his bones taken. Later, he went to trouble Tang San, and called away Xiao Tao, the only trump card around him who could protect him. Idiots are full of establishments. Secondly, if they want to collect Gu Gubo and kidnap someone's granddaughter and force him, it's okay. If you give your own person a hundred-year soul bone, it's outrageous. At least give it a thousand years. Then he forcibly developed an outrageous branch line for the relationship between Pig's Foot and Liu Erlong's entire aunt: using his own aunt as bait to bring down the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex. Because of this, Pig's Knuckle has completely different personalities. If you say he is good, he will not do anything about human affairs. If you say he is bad, he will be compassionate and want to save the world, but he is not a character who bears infamy for the world. This is one-tenth of my experience. I don't know what to write about it later.
On the modification of classic settings
Now that I have seen Chapter 14 of Gengxin City, the first thing is the question of Qian Renxue's level in Wuhun Palace, level 50? Author, don't you think it's outrageous? Qian Renxue went to the Tiandou Empire as an undercover agent when she was nine years old, so she is not level 50 at the age of nine? Grade 10 in one year? So awesome? The second problem is that the protagonist cannot recognize Qian Renxue's intelligence. Wuhundian's surname Qianfa is very beautiful, and he also said that his name is Qianxue. All the elements are given, so you can't guess that this is not a pure forced intelligence? There is also the issue of the protagonist's family background. In Chapter 6, it is mentioned that several generations of their ancestors have worked for the Wuhun Palace. By Chapter 14, when the thunder strike is launched, the father transforms into a young master who defected from the family for love in a vulgar drama. . . . And he had avoided talking about his life experience before. . . . . 6Author, do you have an outline? Let me ask you, do you have an outline? Why do you still think that once it comes out, it comes out all at once?













