I Just Want to Be the Emperor

The plot is good, but too watery. When I saw Chapter 12, I picked four soldiers and said a simple meaning over and over again seven or eight times. It was a bit like Douyin nonsense literature. I just made up a chapter. It is the most stupid of all the online articles I have read. It has not been published yet. Why is the word count so stupid?

Ah (⊙o⊙) The sea, you are all water... More water than a human body.

Did the author forget someone? The protagonist's sister seems to be named Lin Yuer!

It started to get wet, and I poured in water like crazy. One chapter has thousands of words, but actually only a few words are the plot. I wrote one thing over and over again. After writing this chapter, I wrote the next chapter and repeated it again in a different way. Frenzied

It's too watery. The plot in one sentence is watery for several chapters. The key point is that it doesn't look good. I really can't stand it. It's not good overall. It starts with building cannons, which doesn't match the character of the main character who is an ordinary person who travels through time. Although it's not that difficult to make cannons, the supplies of that era were not something you could get if you had money in the game. Buy it. How can it be so easy to buy in a poor mountain village? If nothing else, a gunpowder will kill you. Although there was gunpowder among the people at that time, it was for making fireworks and firecrackers. You have to experiment to make gunpowder for artillery. How can you have it if you don't have time, manpower and material resources to pile it up?

The heroes of the late Qing Dynasty and the Great Warlord of Xinhai are well written. If you are afraid of being sensitive, you can write on other popular websites about the Republic of China literature. It is better than dying here.

It's too watery, and the logic is seriously bad. For example, steel is obviously not good in the early stage. How can we mass-produce flintlock guns when materials science is obviously not good? Various technological innovations have come out during this period. How did you innovate them? How could you develop innovation without a steam engine? The water conservancy machinery you mentioned in your article? That thing has been around for a long time, as well as howitzers and explosive shells. You don't even have smokeless gunpowder and you want to make it? The European Industrial Revolution only started after the steam engine came out. You didn't have the steam engine to have an industrial revolution without the continuous innovation of various technologies?

One thing, I'll give you tens of thousands of words, all of which are blank. In a 600,000-word book, there's not even 600,000 words of actual plot.

Approximately how many words will this book contain? Are there many valley emperors?

There are a lot of unreasonable things, a lot of typos, and it's also verbose.