
The God of Death Crossing the Heavens
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Introduction: After ten years of crescent moons, he was brutally cut in half and killed in the wilderness. The ending of Kubo eating shit broke the hearts of many fans who persisted in watching. As an extremist, Xiao Hengyu bought a ticket to Tokyo and was about to kill Kubo, but he accidentally traveled to Soul Society. When he got there, he discovered that the Soul Society, which was full of loopholes and had a very small structure in Kubo's comics, was actually a rigorously structured and extremely terrifying place! Note: In fact, this book is about a scumbag refugee who cannot make it in Soul Society and has to go to other planes to pretend to be bad, and then comes back to regain his place... The new book: "I Raised a Group of Horror Players" has been uploaded. If you are interested, please check it out and give me some advice, crab! !
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Official(31)Scraped 20d ago
I finally know why your book got poor grades.
I came here from an Earth player. The beginning of your book, Death, was originally from the two-dimensional area. As a result, it traveled to the world of martial arts at the beginning. It was such a failure that I almost dismissed it. The above is purely my personal opinion.
It's too watery to sit down.
After returning from a few days of dragon slaying, I participated in a competition. The content of my competition was small, but there were so many pictures in the middle. I didn't know what I was writing, and it was completely useless. In the middle, I kept praising which person was awesome and which person was great. It was like the protagonist's fight. The reaction of the protagonist also gave us this performance, but when the protagonist fought, he could still win easily. It gives us a kind of pretentious novel in Xiaobai novels, where the villain keeps taunting the protagonist, and then the protagonist slaps him in the face instantly. Then passers-by will try to win over the protagonist in various ways, and they feel shocked. At this time, the feeling of being slapped in the face instantly after the previous constant taunting will make the viewers feel very happy. Praising others is equivalent to the villain mocking the protagonist, and the protagonist's easy victory is equivalent to a slap in the face. However, the author did not write about the various shocks and other things that followed, so I felt very uncomfortable and something was missing. It's okay if you don't write anything later, but if you keep praising others and praising others in front of you, what's the use? Completely dispensable. Just take it with you. I also write so much during competitions, I don't know what the hell is going on. The focus should be on writing about the protagonist's game process.
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I've watched the anime Bleach many times, but I haven't read the manga, so I don't know about Thousand Years of Blood War! Let's talk about your understanding of anime! A Shinigami is a person who can feel spiritual power in the Soul Society after death (soul), and trains to a spiritual pressure level of 3/5. Then he goes to the Seireitei to participate in the selection and joins the Mao Spiritual Arts Academy. After graduation, he is assigned to the Gotei Thirteenth Team, and the Zanpakutō is the Shinigami's. The power of symbiosis (the other half of the personality), the Death God Pressure reaches a certain level and you can use the Zanpakutō (Haikai, Swastikachi) by knowing the name of the Zanpakutō. The spiritual pressure reaches the sixth level. If you master the Haigai, you can become the vice-captain... I won't go into too many details! Lifting the stuck gold finger, the Shinigami's Reiatsu improves the quality of spiritual power by absorbing spiritual power. In the anime, the Shinigami improves through constant fighting and training. (Hakusen Kishun) is all about constant training, and then improves the mastery of Reiatsu and Zanpakutō! So the golden finger of the protagonist is not to ask the protagonist to learn some internal skills, swordsmanship, or physical training! Instead, we use these martial arts to broaden our horizons in details, such as what changes will be caused by the integration of the Heavenly World, the Nine Yin Nine Yangs and the Great Shift of the Universe in Tai Chi. If you master this principle, it will not take a minute to improve your spiritual pressure! If you master the swordsmanship of all sects, will your cutting skills still be inferior? If you have mastered the boxing and kicking skills of various sects, how can you still be inferior to your own useless fight? With a mastery of light arts from all sects, and combined with Shunpo, it's time for "Shunshin" Yoruichi to retire! In the end, all the horizontal training skills are integrated, which is stronger than Xu's super-speed regeneration! In fact, the author has a prejudice against the low-level martial arts world and believes that it is not as good as the power system of the God of Death, but I need to explain that the system of the God of Death is too rough compared to Jin Yong's system, let alone Huang Yi's martial arts system and the later Xianxia system!
I just finished writing a good book, hey
The author of this
The time-travel flow is beautiful because of the sense of distance between worlds, but what the author wrote in capital letters is really poisonous, and it is really poisonous to change the destiny of the world and be wiped out. This second-dimensional Death God comes to China (maybe Shattered Void to Xianxia, Mythology) The martial arts style is really poisonous, and the system itself is mysterious, but this thief is rubbish. The advantage is that the main character wears a woman's theme very well, and the fat man is also very cute. Zhou Zhiruo is very beautiful, why is he fat? There's no reason yet, there are a lot of typos, but the writing has a good atmosphere that makes people want to read it, so keep going!
What the hell? You suddenly traveled through time?
It's my second time traveling. I haven't written anything yet and I'm going through it again. The plot in the later part is also incoherent. Is it because I haven't published it enough? It's a very interesting novel, but why does it end up like that in the later part?
this novel
Where did the rating come from? The quality of the book is not worthy of such a high rating, right?
God of death, give me a story about Heaven and Dragon Slaying.
Seeing that the God of Death is coming, it turns out that the God of Death doesn't have much to do with it. He just went to the martial arts and slipped away.
I'm not a devil either. . after all
I just finished watching Return of Zhou Zhiruo, and I haven't watched a few episodes of Death. As far as I'm concerned, I don't really like the Death part. . But I haven't seen enough of Zhou Zhiruo. . It's quite interesting, but it feels a bit sloppy and not subtle enough. . It always looks cute after wearing it. . . I am so cute. . . Novels that are pure flow, light comedy, and coincidental collisions are my favorites. . . On the contrary, I don't understand the God of Death at all. . . Only watched four or five episodes. . I'm not a die-hard comic fan, but the one I read the most is Naruto. But I didn't see the part where Naruto became Hokage. . . So said. . You, the author, are done for! What to write about Death. We don't understand either, and we don't dare to ask. Those who know the God of Death will see if your setting will cause drama or embarrassment. . We don't understand either, and we don't dare to ask.
It's a shame, but my comment was deleted
The plot is seriously out of context, and even trivial things in other worlds are not worth mentioning.
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Official(31)Scraped 20d ago
I finally know why your book got poor grades.
I came here from an Earth player. The beginning of your book, Death, was originally from the two-dimensional area. As a result, it traveled to the world of martial arts at the beginning. It was such a failure that I almost dismissed it. The above is purely my personal opinion.
It's too watery to sit down.
After returning from a few days of dragon slaying, I participated in a competition. The content of my competition was small, but there were so many pictures in the middle. I didn't know what I was writing, and it was completely useless. In the middle, I kept praising which person was awesome and which person was great. It was like the protagonist's fight. The reaction of the protagonist also gave us this performance, but when the protagonist fought, he could still win easily. It gives us a kind of pretentious novel in Xiaobai novels, where the villain keeps taunting the protagonist, and then the protagonist slaps him in the face instantly. Then passers-by will try to win over the protagonist in various ways, and they feel shocked. At this time, the feeling of being slapped in the face instantly after the previous constant taunting will make the viewers feel very happy. Praising others is equivalent to the villain mocking the protagonist, and the protagonist's easy victory is equivalent to a slap in the face. However, the author did not write about the various shocks and other things that followed, so I felt very uncomfortable and something was missing. It's okay if you don't write anything later, but if you keep praising others and praising others in front of you, what's the use? Completely dispensable. Just take it with you. I also write so much during competitions, I don't know what the hell is going on. The focus should be on writing about the protagonist's game process.
Give an opinion
I've watched the anime Bleach many times, but I haven't read the manga, so I don't know about Thousand Years of Blood War! Let's talk about your understanding of anime! A Shinigami is a person who can feel spiritual power in the Soul Society after death (soul), and trains to a spiritual pressure level of 3/5. Then he goes to the Seireitei to participate in the selection and joins the Mao Spiritual Arts Academy. After graduation, he is assigned to the Gotei Thirteenth Team, and the Zanpakutō is the Shinigami's. The power of symbiosis (the other half of the personality), the Death God Pressure reaches a certain level and you can use the Zanpakutō (Haikai, Swastikachi) by knowing the name of the Zanpakutō. The spiritual pressure reaches the sixth level. If you master the Haigai, you can become the vice-captain... I won't go into too many details! Lifting the stuck gold finger, the Shinigami's Reiatsu improves the quality of spiritual power by absorbing spiritual power. In the anime, the Shinigami improves through constant fighting and training. (Hakusen Kishun) is all about constant training, and then improves the mastery of Reiatsu and Zanpakutō! So the golden finger of the protagonist is not to ask the protagonist to learn some internal skills, swordsmanship, or physical training! Instead, we use these martial arts to broaden our horizons in details, such as what changes will be caused by the integration of the Heavenly World, the Nine Yin Nine Yangs and the Great Shift of the Universe in Tai Chi. If you master this principle, it will not take a minute to improve your spiritual pressure! If you master the swordsmanship of all sects, will your cutting skills still be inferior? If you have mastered the boxing and kicking skills of various sects, how can you still be inferior to your own useless fight? With a mastery of light arts from all sects, and combined with Shunpo, it's time for "Shunshin" Yoruichi to retire! In the end, all the horizontal training skills are integrated, which is stronger than Xu's super-speed regeneration! In fact, the author has a prejudice against the low-level martial arts world and believes that it is not as good as the power system of the God of Death, but I need to explain that the system of the God of Death is too rough compared to Jin Yong's system, let alone Huang Yi's martial arts system and the later Xianxia system!
I just finished writing a good book, hey
The author of this
The time-travel flow is beautiful because of the sense of distance between worlds, but what the author wrote in capital letters is really poisonous, and it is really poisonous to change the destiny of the world and be wiped out. This second-dimensional Death God comes to China (maybe Shattered Void to Xianxia, Mythology) The martial arts style is really poisonous, and the system itself is mysterious, but this thief is rubbish. The advantage is that the main character wears a woman's theme very well, and the fat man is also very cute. Zhou Zhiruo is very beautiful, why is he fat? There's no reason yet, there are a lot of typos, but the writing has a good atmosphere that makes people want to read it, so keep going!
What the hell? You suddenly traveled through time?
It's my second time traveling. I haven't written anything yet and I'm going through it again. The plot in the later part is also incoherent. Is it because I haven't published it enough? It's a very interesting novel, but why does it end up like that in the later part?
this novel
Where did the rating come from? The quality of the book is not worthy of such a high rating, right?
God of death, give me a story about Heaven and Dragon Slaying.
Seeing that the God of Death is coming, it turns out that the God of Death doesn't have much to do with it. He just went to the martial arts and slipped away.
I'm not a devil either. . after all
I just finished watching Return of Zhou Zhiruo, and I haven't watched a few episodes of Death. As far as I'm concerned, I don't really like the Death part. . But I haven't seen enough of Zhou Zhiruo. . It's quite interesting, but it feels a bit sloppy and not subtle enough. . It always looks cute after wearing it. . . I am so cute. . . Novels that are pure flow, light comedy, and coincidental collisions are my favorites. . . On the contrary, I don't understand the God of Death at all. . . Only watched four or five episodes. . I'm not a die-hard comic fan, but the one I read the most is Naruto. But I didn't see the part where Naruto became Hokage. . . So said. . You, the author, are done for! What to write about Death. We don't understand either, and we don't dare to ask. Those who know the God of Death will see if your setting will cause drama or embarrassment. . We don't understand either, and we don't dare to ask.
It's a shame, but my comment was deleted
The plot is seriously out of context, and even trivial things in other worlds are not worth mentioning.















