
Ninja World: Kirigakure Restarts
About This Novel
When Taketori Rokuzawa opened his eyes again, he suddenly found that he was inexplicably reborn in the world of Naruto. But just when he thought he could show off his skills as a time traveler, he suddenly discovered that it was not only himself who was reborn, but also... (This is a pure Naruto fanfic, without any messy golden fingers. Although it still starts with Kirigakure, it is different from the previous one. I hope you all like it!)
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Official(5)Scraped 6d ago
The subject matter is very novel
The writing is good, but I feel it is difficult to control. I am afraid that you will collapse in writing, but I still have to work hard.
The subject matter is novel, but the writing style remains the same.
The logic is confusing and the writing style needs to be improved.
Author you are completely thankless, everyone is reborn, do you know how confusing it is, how to write it? How to write Akatsuki, how to write Konoha, how to write other ninja villages, and how to write Obito, it's a complete mess.
Isn't this corpse bone vein also from Otsutsuki? It's a synthetic blood vein.
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I'm writing a new book. Write it well and don't collapse. ♥
I'm writing a new book. Write it well and don't collapse.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 6d ago
The subject matter is very novel
The writing is good, but I feel it is difficult to control. I am afraid that you will collapse in writing, but I still have to work hard.
The subject matter is novel, but the writing style remains the same.
The logic is confusing and the writing style needs to be improved.
Author you are completely thankless, everyone is reborn, do you know how confusing it is, how to write it? How to write Akatsuki, how to write Konoha, how to write other ninja villages, and how to write Obito, it's a complete mess.
Isn't this corpse bone vein also from Otsutsuki? It's a synthetic blood vein.
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I'm writing a new book. Write it well and don't collapse. ♥
I'm writing a new book. Write it well and don't collapse.









