Zhetian: Am I Weak? Then There Will Be Unlimited Combat Power

The protagonist's plug-in is not as good as Ye Fan's supreme understanding, right? It strengthens Ye Fan too much, and it feels like it strengthens Ye Fan's talent to the point of ruthlessness. .

You may have had no obvious problems before the Tomb of the Blue Emperor, but what have you been up to after that? It took two whole days and four chapters to write about your cultivation process (please, the advantage and attraction of this book is clearly the monster with a heaven-defying numerical value that can block the sky, otherwise there is no difference between you and other Zhetian fan fiction, there is no attraction), and the battle between you and Yao Xi in the last chapter ends in an anticlimactic end. There are too many ideas and the writing can't grasp it. Run away, run away, wait half a year and I will come back to see if there are any eunuchs or major problems, and I will see again

From the beginning, he feels sorry for himself and complains about everything. This kind of trash should be worthy of being the protagonist. Their ruthless mortal body is countless times worse than yours at the beginning. They can counterattack and become an emperor. You can at least become a saint at the beginning, but you are still here complaining. I have read so many novels, but I have never seen many garbage protagonists like you.

I'm really impressed by this start. What era is this? Don't write this kind of opening. It starts with self-pity and self-pity. We are here to read a novel. What are you going to write? The character of the protagonist, eh, it's 8:02, I've read so many fanfics, this is the one I started with. Eating four holy fruits is already a good start. Others have a similar start, and they are very optimistic. They work hard, and when they fail, they hold on to their thighs. You are so self-pitying.

I thought the plug-in was a kind of plug-in that every time the strength increases by one level, there is a clone with the same strength, but cannot exist at the same time, and can be released into all the worlds. But it turns out that it is like this. This way of writing is wrong. How do you divide the strength into other selves? Appeared out of thin air! In the end, they can still bring their strength back to you. I'm really convinced. Isn't this just a matryoshka doll?

You tricked people into coming here, Akaishi. This useless guy can still be the protagonist. What the hell is that?

The front is okay, the back is so-so, too watery, is this still about covering the sky? It looks like a mess. If you can't write it clearly, don't intersperse it with so much content from other novels. I don't want to say more about the protagonist anymore, it's hard to comment. Such a strong character is really made to look like F W by an abstract protagonist. You have stacked combat power and all monsters. Damn, instead of pushing all the way, you are doing abstraction here. It makes me want to vomit. This is not as good as the protagonist without plug-ins, who is practicing diligently in the front, not wanting to be ordinary, and not wanting to lie down on Ye Fan. What kind of character does the protagonist who has the plug-in really think of himself? With all kinds of disguises and whether you have cultivated or not, your Taoist heart has been eaten by a dog. If you don't cultivate properly, with all kinds of layouts and various disguises, are you already a great emperor or something? What has you done to this world that covers the sky? I was so speechless that I was still there. The Immortal Emperor and the Immortal Emperor are still there. One of your Taoist monks is really not afraid of cause and effect. Besides, do you understand what you said about covering the sky? In the early days, even the Great Emperor didn't have much respect. If you tell them about the reincarnation of the Immortal Emperor, it's almost like 666 actors don't even act. They are just one person. They don't even know the realms above the Immortal. I really don't know what you are thinking? With such a powerful plug-in, unlimited blood volume and unlimited values, instead of crossing several realms to suppress all enemies in the world, you are just doing something weird here. Isn't it interesting? Let me tell the truth here. As for the character of the protagonist, he is really not worthy of this world and his cheats. He is not domineering at all. He is just showing off.

The author writes very well, why don't you continue writing?

What have you been writing recently? Is the author completely crazy?

The front of this book is very creative! But what are you writing next?