Dragon Clan: Not Coming Back, but Restarting into a Hard Copy

Dragon Clan Fanfic Five Stars The fanfic I have seen so far is the most consistent with the original work and the overall plot is not broken. Five stars first. With the exception of Chu Zihang and Fingel, the character designs have more or less collapsed. One star will be deducted. I have read 150 chapters so far. The overall plot has not broken down the characters, but the characters have been broken down very much. Lu Mingfei has a self-deprecating and inferior personality, a funny personality to hide himself, and a little devil personality. It stands to reason that after the world restarts, Lu Mingfei will kill his funny personality or inferiority complex, but in this book, Lu Mingfei still follows the route of funny personality. Caesar's character design is very poor. In the original book, Caesar is a playboy, a graceful leader, and a proud captain. The Caesar here is not reflected and is a bit funny. The Caesar in the academy will not praise Lu Mingfei when he sees him shining so brightly. Instead, he should praise him and then include Lu Mingfei in the list of opponents. When he comes to Japan, the Caesar becomes even more funny, overwhelming Lu Mingfei. The scene where Genji Heavy Industries beat Deadpool didn't reflect his leading style, so it should have been written more chillingly. The character of Angers should be his pocket knife. He is fast, accurate and ruthless, and does not need to talk nonsense. When fighting against Norton, Angers' inner feelings changed in an indescribable way. In the meeting, everyone talked nonsense. Speaking of Norton, as an important character throughout the early plot, the writing is really messed up. The personalities of Old Tang and Norton were poorly handled. After Old Tang was forcibly awakened, there was no inner struggle process. Moreover, the bargaining chip used by Lu Mingfei and Norton to negotiate with Norton was actually the bond between brothers. It would have been better to use alchemy to heal Constantine's leg than this bargaining chip. The gradual psychological transformation process of Norton is very important, slowly transforming into Old Tang, rather than suddenly abandoning Norton's personality and doing Old Tang's things with Norton's heart. Most of the other dragon kings were normal. Norton turned into a cute monster and hit Ange on the chest, with no majestic aura at all. Jörmungandr appears for the first time in the chapter of the negotiation between Loki and the king. Jörmungandr is a dragon king. He has a dragon king aura. He talks and acts more delicately than Eriyi, so it is difficult to break. Finally, when it comes to the Japanese branch, Minamoto and Yabuki Sakura and Crow Yasha are still the same as before, which is good, but Eri is a little bit broken. The author must write down Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi. The details of characterization are very, very, very important. Eri Yi ran away from home to save Lu Mingfei from the fire and water, and then followed Lu Mingfei to live in a hotel. Eri Yi realized that Lu Mingfei would take her back to Genji Heavy Industries. The phrase "Won't Sakura run away secretly?" When bringing Eri Yi in, she would be more likely to say "Will Sakura leave me behind?" Moreover, even if Eriyi realizes that Lu Mingfei will take her back to Genji Heavy Industries, she will be careful not to let him discover her little thoughts. A good dragon fanfic needs a slow pace, the plot is too fast, and there are too few details. Deduction of one star. The plot develops too fast. After the restart, Lu Mingfei's psychology has not changed, and he still has a funny personality. Added a setting that there will be an internship period after entering the academy. Why is there an internship period? All the members became Lu Mingfei, and started to be more or less funny. The main plot in the early stage revolves around Old Tang. Before Old Tang and Lu Mingfei appeared, Old Tang's life before running away should also be depicted. Old Tang's fear when Norton's personality was awakened turned into confusion and then he accepted the memories that hit him. Instead of Norton being awakened, he should directly release the coercion and fly away with a roar, instead of playing house here, fighting inexplicably, and then we are brothers. I forgive you and reconcile as before. I don't want to say too much that it feels like a spoiler, but I just think it's so ridiculous that it's so graphic that I can't help but want to complain about it. The character design of Loki is very good. It can fill in some pitfalls and connect the plot without affecting the main line. Some plots are also very well designed. Add one star. I suspect that Jiangnan gave you the script and asked you to write it, filling in a lot of pitfalls and adding many very reasonable settings. However, I still think it is better for Pompeii to set up the plot instead of Loki. After all, the overall plot set up by the Wind King is more in line with the original work.

Long Wuli has made it clear that the little devil only wants Lu Mingfei to move towards one goal. He doesn't care how many friends or relatives Lu Mingfei will lose. Long Wuli and Lu Mingfei were stabbed so badly that the little devil and the principal had ulterior motives for him. As a result, you restarted Lu Mingfei here and still listened to the little devil in everything. I was really convinced. Even when Lu Mingfei was knifed, it was inseparable from the little devil. He hoped that Lu Mingfei would become a tyrant who would not shed blood or tears, even if he sacrificed himself and everyone in the end. As a result, you are still playing the same old tricks. Your writing style is still good, but you have a bit of the Jiangnan literary youth syndrome. There is nothing wrong with learning this. You couldn't have made Lu Mingfei's character as iron-blooded any better than you are now. Lu Mingfei's character in Long Wuli has problems to begin with. When encountering difficulties, he is not as good as Long Er's senior brother and Caesar. Your novel does have quite a Jiangnan flavor, but it was so Jiangnan that I was disgusted.

The quality is very good. Please update it. Please update it.

The high-density long-term closed loop in the foreshadowing is the top level among the Dragon Race fandom. The character motivations, behavioral patterns and emotional closed loops between different major events are quite natural and interlocking. Basically, the whole process has the top-level group portrait narrative level of the original Dragon 3. The original Dragon 4-5 chase line flow account and MacAllen numerical supermodel issues have been repaired. The problem of Dragon King-level battles not using the spirit spirit has been greatly optimized. The original background NPCs such as Henkel, Flamel and Beowulf all have Dragon King-level combat records and have become self-propelled characters. The emotional flow of most of the main characters changes with the external environment and events, with self-machine interactions that break away from formulas, and the narrative level is very high. The setting of Word Spirit has not changed significantly into a magic battle or fantasy novel, but it still retains many of the detailed and rigorous settings and weighing costs of the original Dragon Tribe. The numerical balance of time and space-like speech spirits has greatly strengthened the scarcity and effectiveness of Time Zero and Alchemy Bullets, and solved the problem of Chu Tianjiao and Angers' Odin taking them casually. Basically there is no formulaic check-in path and unit drama narrative of the original Dragon 4-5 Dissatisfaction: The King and Zeus cut each other too hard Macallan and Kungunir were cut too hard. The price of the Corpse Spring Sword is too low The effect of the crown was not well written Ghost-toothed Dragon Viper is actually a first-generation species-level skill

This is the fanfic that I think is most consistent with the original work, and it is also the author who I think is the most persistent. It is difficult for dragon fans to persevere if their grades are not good, and they will basically run away. However, the author did not stop updating for a long time and finally persisted and updated until the end. I think this is a very good ending for a follower like me. I hope the author can open more and better new books in the future, but in the end he does not want to make a fortune. After all, I will have no books to read.

The character setting is not too OOC, and the setting of the prison road is also reasonable. Compared with other fanfics in which Li Yi is the heroine or the prison road is reborn, the most surprising thing for me is the emotional scene between them.

It's okay in the early stage, but it's a mess in the middle and late stages. Really

Come on, good review. At the beginning, the writing style was very similar to Jiangnan. Later, it gradually developed its own style to intersperse the plot of the original text, to the extent that if the update was interrupted, the blade would be mailed!

It looks good, why is there no one there?

I would like to ask if there will be any updates?