The Man in Warhammer is the Medieval Sanguinius

The front was fine, but it was pulled recently. I was writing a short Warhammer story, but I couldn't bear to die for a supporting character, so I improvised a civilian hero and then killed the deus ex machina bad guy. I want to tease the readers' emotions while also saving pen and ink. My assessment is that it is neither capable nor sincere.

Because I only saw it on the shelves, my evaluation was okay. The protagonist is a little girl. She is relatively young and has little impact on the outside world. Therefore, I didn't notice anything when I saw it on the shelves.

It's said to be a medieval warhammer, but you can still read it without any background in warhammer knowledge.

Hey, it's a pity that it's not a Gray Knight. After all, being handsome is a lifelong thing.

For this author who writes about medieval Warhammer fan fiction, Warhammer 40k is not unpopular at the moment, but Middle Ages is relatively unpopular. There are many interlocking easter eggs in the plot. I like it very much and hope everyone can come and watch it.

Writing about Sanguinius in the Middle Ages is a good idea, writing about the relationship between the protagonist and the vampire ancestor is also a reasonable idea, and writing about the protagonist running a territory is still a good idea, but can you be less sensational? Every two chapters, you have to write a long and sensational scene between the protagonist and other characters. No matter how much you emphasize that the protagonist values ​​relationships, you can't use the same technique so often. It makes me tired. I suggest you put more effort into combat and other aspects, otherwise such a good idea will be wasted.