Double Penetration Lord: Let Go of That Elf Girl

It's hard to say. If a protagonist with double portals encounters a powerful enemy in a different world and cannot defeat him, the first thing he thinks of is not to open the door and run back to modern times, but to carry two detonators up there and die together? The first few chapters are okay, but starting from the appearance of the female character, it becomes a bit abstract, such as repeatedly putting up with the female elf of unknown origin, or the female elf holding a sword across her neck in the tent and then the protagonist reaches out to hold the blade? Can't pinch the hilt of the sword or the opponent's arm or wrist? Does it have to be so bitter and bloody, brother? This is not a Qiong Yao drama

It's too poisonous. The protagonist is no different from a mentally retarded person. The protagonist is just an ordinary person who knows the dangers of magic but has no brains to rush forward. This world has extraordinary systems that have traveled for such a long time but there is no thought of learning or hiring extraordinary people. To open up territory with a group of ordinary people, I really don't know how to write the word "death".

Then I went to a village and a zombie wave broke out, and I died together with the devil. As a person in the 21st century, there is a double door. Is the protagonist that stupid? When you see a woman unable to walk, she is still a person from another world who is worth dying for. From the beginning, she is an ordinary person who knows nothing but makes herself look like a noble person.

In Western science fiction novels, the main character has a Chinese name. This is a huge disrespect to the readers. It has no sense of immersion and makes you sick after reading it! ! If you, the author, want to pretend to read it yourself, then read it slowly alone!

This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever move me. I didn't expect to see such an exquisite book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe how wonderful this book is, so I just want to say this: My only regret is that I haven't read it yet.

A modern man with a double door runs wherever he sees danger. He doesn't run away quickly when an accident occurs and wants to die together. His body is parasitized by demons and he commits suicide. This protagonist looks like he has a mental problem.

It was originally based on the subject matter, but it turned out that the first part of the book was about an elf I just met, who was having an affair, and acted like a goddess at every turn. The emotional development was retarded and awkward, as if he had never seen a woman before. The author worked very hard to create a crisis situation, but it was like scratching a creaking nest. Look, what I wrote is terrible. I created a drama of you leaving quickly and I will break up. I tried hard to write passionate stories, but the plot seemed like a joke. I really couldn't stand it. Less self-pleasure and less licking of girls. I don't give one star because it's not easy to type.

Update it soon, the writing is quite good, update it soon

There are too many poisonous points, and the protagonist is insane.

This requires me to see what state one is in. Ninth level, lord, demigod, god, lower god, middle god, upper god Lord God, Creator God, Transcendence............