Something's Wrong with This Knight

Any comments or suggestions are welcome, even if it is pure criticism. The author will never delete or control comments, and is always working hard to write a good story. I happened to be involved in a project recently, and I was busy until early in the morning every day. Because I love staying up late to continue coding, I only slept four hours a day. I just want to express my attitude towards writing and ask for a chance to read. ٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

At a glance, I listened to more than 20 chapters. I couldn't stand it, so I turned to the next chapter title. I didn't transform for the first time until chapter 47? ? ? ? ? I didn't listen very carefully. Did he transform twenty chapters ago? If it is really the transformation in forty-seven chapters, I personally suggest that you rewrite it. It is too late to change it now. The feature of your book is that the Kamen Rider fights the traditional western fantasy medieval knight, but it takes more than forty chapters to transform? Are you not going off topic? I listened to it intermittently, and I remembered that the setting of this book was quite interesting, but it turned out that it sounded like a very traditional Western fantasy. I came here for the setting, but in the end, your setting was not written in more than 20 chapters? Play?

It's a pity. I thought it was pretty good at first, but it turned out that the battle force was too heavy. I just didn't go on missions and took half a month off at a time.

It's okay, but the combat power is too heavy.

Yes, the protagonist is not stupid, the writing is smooth, no one makes mistakes, it deserves five stars

The book is average, but I can see the bright spots. I would like to encourage newcomers.

I read the latest chapter in one go. It's so enjoyable. The writing is also very good. It's very well written.

When you first traveled through time, were the time knights hiding from you and looking at you?

Using thermal weapons in a western fantasy world, I don't really like this setting