Immortality Begins with a Beast Master

It's too exaggerated to say that opponents within the sect directly assassinate the other's disciples when they advance. No matter how they fight, it's all the matter of the Nascent Soul cultivator himself. Arranging disciples to kill each other has already crossed the bottom line of a sect. And it's still within the sect. The key peak master knows the cause and effect, but he is neutral and is afraid of involving the cause and effect. It's ridiculous. This is a sect, not a gangster. The dignified peak masters have come to your territory to cause trouble, but they still hide out. I don't understand what the author means by this design. Has the good Goudao farming development flow turned into a conspiracy and conspiracy to survive? To put it bluntly, the previous article is all about daily farming style, and the sect is relatively harmonious. It has screened out a large number of readers who like farming flow. However, after being listed on the shelves, it suddenly turned into sect conspiracy and conspiracy. Moreover, the main character is still a Qi refining rookie and gets involved in the struggle of golden elixir and even Nascent Soul. Is the author trying to drive away the daily style readers? If you write this way at the beginning, you will have to set up a foreshadowing to give everyone time. It also allows readers who like to watch the fight to stay. As a result, the two sides are now unhappy. Otherwise, we should arrange for the sect's big boss to come out to mediate and limit the fight to one person. The powerful disciples of both sides actually directly kill people in the sect. What kind of sect is this?

If you are bored, you can still take a look

Well, I just finished reading the update, let me share my thoughts. First, the author has certain writing skills and skills. At present, it seems that it is Taneda Ruka Yuju. I don't know whether the author prefers daily life or combat. But for now, the daily interactions are not prominent enough, the plot is too bland, the positioning of pet beasts, and the contrast in personality are all shallow or even vague. The plot is bound to be bland. Second, the article involves many modern measurement units, meters, centimeters, kilometers, and sometimes hours and minutes. There are also adjectives: basketball court, basketball size, some descriptions, difficulty of primary school and college, clown mask, which does not fit the setting background of the classical fairy world. How to put it? It's like I'm dreaming, and there's a voice telling me to wake up, which really affects my viewing experience. Third, the author has a habit of using many words over and over again, such as "double wings", "black wings", and "mysterious skills". This writing style can be seen in many other places. There are also some inappropriate descriptions that are not fluent. Blazing Black Eagle. Isn't Blazing Eagle bad? Fire Luan Bird, Fire Luan, can't do it? Crane Bird, Can't Crane? It's like writing about a sparrow bird. There is also the Immortal Clan. I understand that this is an honorific name, which may generally refer to a family such as the Spirit World or the Immortal World. It's like calling him a great monk in the foundation-building period. Many authors use this name to describe what kind of fairy clan they are, except that they have a high level. In the article, they are at a low level and they don't dare to call it that. Finally, I hope the author can improve and avoid minor flaws. Strengthen the storytelling. If you are not good at writing twists and turns and bizarre stories, then write more about daily life and draw more comparisons between pet animals. I say all this because I hope the author will make progress. I will keep chasing, come on!

The early stage is mediocre, but you can still watch it. Chapter 9 is very poisonous, so I'm trying to persuade you to quit😐

In the second chapter, I was persuaded to quit. Elementary school students are not as good as playing Sky Blue Chicken and Blue Sky Chicken for a while. Please can you have some brains?

I came in when I saw the title of the novel. I read the introduction, good guys, pet names, pet skills, and pet weaknesses. Those who didn't know it thought I was in the world of Pokemon. My evaluation is the same as others. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. I will not read this book.

After listening to the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist really deserved to be beaten to death.

Even if an evil cultivator comes to a mountain gate so casually, he will be convinced.

He dared to go out on a mission to find the perfect Qi training just a few days after practicing, but he was still asked to repay the favor and was directly persuaded to quit.

No, bro, almost all spiritual beasts are birds. How about you write about the Bird Clan? If you have gold and water spiritual roots, you can choose a non-attribute technique. If your gold and water spiritual roots don't have contract attributes close to your spiritual roots, you can contract a fire attribute that fails to revert to your ancestors. Force the rhythm.