Entertainment Starts from the Heart

First of all, you take Brother Xigua too seriously. Others just watch it in a variety show and take it for fun. Who would stare at others every day and spend such a long time writing about it? It's boring and feels like it's making a mountain out of a molehill. The male protagonist is already on a variety show and still wants to keep a low profile. Is he suffering from some serious illness? Brother Xigua may be trending one day and no one knows about it a week later, but variety shows have to be aired for a long time and are often trending. And even if you solve it now, you won't be able to find out everything when the show airs. A bit seriously ill.

The book is good, but the plot is too long. I have written 200 points in ten days and it is not over yet.

Book Title: Entertainment starts with the heartbeat, so the focus should be on entertainment. Starting from the heartbeat refers to the beginning of the male and female protagonists participating in the heartbeat program, and then the 30-day heartbeat program. The author wrote 230 chapters, and the total is only 270 chapters so far. When participating in the heart-pounding show, there are almost no scene changes. Most of the scenes are in the villa where the show is filmed. Thinking about the 30-day program, 230 chapters were written. How did the author write it? It is a description of various psychological activities, a variety of psychological analysis, and every character (six amateur guests) is as awesome as a psychologist. It can be said that it writes more about daily life and should belong to the romance novel category. The protagonist's entrepreneurial chapter and the entertainment industry account for about 5% each, and the rest is about daily life, accounting for 90%. I can also understand that the author wrote it this way. The scenes are almost limited, and it is easy to write under roughly the same circumstances every day. But it really feels like the writing is seriously off topic. The description of the heroine Tangtang in the novel feels a bit fragmented. On the one hand, it reflects the silly and cute personality of the heroine, which is good, but it is really overdone. When it is written that the male protagonist analyzes the studio for the heroine, ordinary people can understand it, but the heroine cannot understand it. There are also many scenes that the heroine cannot understand. This is not stupid, but stupid. /At the same time, the heroine occasionally shows that she is smarter than ordinary people. She can see many things and analyze many details. Therefore, the depiction of the heroine is a bit fragmented. On the one hand, I wanted to write it as silly and cute, but ended up overdoing it and writing it in a silly direction. On the other hand, it shows that the heroine is very smart and witty. The daily descriptions are good, the dialogues are not brainless, the IQ is online, but there is still a lot of dog food. Sweet love. The last thing I want to complain about is that the author shortened the relationship between the male and female protagonists to just ten days, which is really incredible. Although there is an explanation, it still feels incredible.

Barely watchable. Suitable for little girls. Not recommended for old bookworms.

What can I say, I have some suggestions, the plot pace can be a little faster. Otherwise, I feel that I can write about 1,000 chapters after 30 days. And some unimportant ones can actually be omitted. All in all, the pace is too slow. Everything else is very good. Of course, it would be better if there were ten updates a day.

It is recommended not to give the system too much presence, just send tasks. You can create a supporting role to give him a funny character😁

I can't stand it, it's too poisonous, 30 chapters a day, too much vernacular, every chapter tries to figure out other people's thoughts

This novel is very in line with my personal taste, I really feel good about it

I quite like it, but it's really too ink-filled. It only took two days to complete more than 60 chapters. If I wait for 30 days, it will be over 1,000 chapters.

Originally a person with a high IQ was successful in career and longed for family affection, but now a person with a low IQ was mediocre and longed for success. It was fine at the beginning, but slowly it became a waste of time. If it weren't for the heroine's supervision, it would have been nothing. Why don't you understand any common sense? I feel like I have become stupid, like games, songs, movies, TV, live broadcasts. You have seen them all, and you can probably understand why they are so popular. But now I feel like I am an idiot. The programming is still included with the original. I hope the author can write better. If you are doing nothing, you are not an idiot. The more people like this, the more they know, but they don't know much about it.