The World Journey of Ancient Blood

From chapters 17 to 28, they are all about that woman. What is the author writing about? They all doubt that the woman is the protagonist.

There are a lot of similar English names, which makes people confused. Most of the time, they don't know who is who. Except for the protagonist, there are very few descriptions of other characters. If you want to understand the storyline of the Wizarding World, you must be an experienced player of the Wizard, because only experienced players will know the character characteristics of the Wizard. Of course I have never played The Witcher.

I've never played The Witcher before, so I can't understand the previous part. I feel it's very confusing, and the connection between the world and the world is inexplicable. There's no clear explanation, and the author didn't explain the background of the story.

The concept of this book is quite good, the protagonist learns spells and the world of The Witcher 3, as well as the fate world that travels through. Integrating dnd's spell system is a good way to rationalize combat power, and can also attract more wizard literature lovers. Under the above premise, the shortcomings are also very obvious: 1. For readers who don't know the game The Witcher 3, the long paragraphs of interactions between supporting characters are simply a disaster. New readers have no idea what they are talking about and what the author wants to write. The author also needs to learn from how to present his own story and worldview. 2. If the two worlds are not closely related, it is recommended not to describe them in two lines, as this will make your story very scattered. 3. Now that it is confirmed that the protagonist is a spell caster, why not explain in detail the role of the protagonist's ability in the story? There are many interesting spell combinations in DND, which can also allow the protagonist to show great strength without losing control of his combat power. (For example, use Shadow Channel and Flash with your back to the enemy to clear the field) 4. Typos, especially when situation 1 exists, can quickly dissuade readers. 5. The reasonable golden finger, the book of thousands of methods in the head, is an artifact in DND. It has strong functions and is not just a textbook for fools. If you don't want the protagonist to abuse it, you should find an opportunity to explain why you are castrated.

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(1) Collect a fan title, and you can send it out when it is operational in the future. (2) Any world you want to travel to can be anything (except the places you must go to in the outline), 😂 I will think about how to cast spells in other worlds...

I just read Chapter 15, and I was upset. The confusing narrative was interspersed with no logic, which made me upset. I didn't even understand the main character, but there were a lot of other characters. I didn't even know the main character, and there were a bunch of supporting characters that were too scattered.

If I hadn't read more than a thousand books, I would only learn three questions QAQ

I can't write it anymore, I will update it and post it in the group later without spending any money.

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