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The flat peach is one of the ten spiritual roots and is a great tonic for immortals, but you almost made it worthless. The male protagonist has a demonic aura, even if he is restrained, but there are so many immortals in heaven, everyone finds out, and there is a demon mirror in Nantianmen, so it's not good! The conspiracy of Journey to the West is forced to become a coincidence. Wu Chengen has a different mind than ours, so the loopholes in Journey to the West need to be filled by fan fiction. Since Bodhi can calculate the secrets of heaven, why can't Sanqing? I have already taken the elixir, so how can I not calculate it? Although the male protagonist is a substitute, it can still be calculated. It is just that the male protagonist is another crow. But how can a crow spirit sneak into the heaven and eat it everywhere? Then the male protagonist suddenly breaks out and the story ends. 🤡🤡🤡

I just read some of it, and I feel that the plot is quite reasonable. The main thing is that it is good to watch. Why do you care so much? There are so many people posting one-star reviews and then making a lot of criticisms. I feel that it is actually meaningless. The author should write it anyway, and you can't influence others. Why bother? It's a novel. If you enjoy reading it, just read more if you are interested. If you don't, just don't read it. There is no need to bury people here, right?

In terms of writing, there's nothing to say. It's much better than me, a parallel importer who can only write journal compositions. The writing is smooth and the sentence structure of the article is complete. It's really good. What makes me uncomfortable is, first of all, I read the book at the beginning. First, the author has repeatedly set the third level of heaven, earth and people. Suddenly, a Daluo Jinxian and a Hunyuan Xuanti appear. They also say that the difference in strength between the third levels is insurmountable. Later, they say that the main character, Earth, can beat the heavenly monkey in two moves. What the hell? ? ? ? Good guy, it turns out he also has idealistic fighting power? Second, the author repeatedly emphasizes that he is a top student at Tsinghua University and Peking University, or has a doctorate. But in the roller coaster example, my dear, the gravity of your doctorate is really different from what we learned. It's outrageous. Thirdly, the character of the protagonist is inexplicable. He said he wanted to be stubborn at the beginning, but as soon as the monkey was crushed under the mountain, the protagonist started to show off in front of the waiter when he entered the city. This change in his face really made me numb. I have been practicing for hundreds of years, and I have been practicing to the point where I can express my emotions and anger. In the end, I just read the first ten or so chapters, but I didn't finish them. I couldn't stand these flaws, so I finished testing them in advance for new book friends. Finally, I know that this rating will definitely be deleted by the so-called administrator, so it doesn't matter.

Did you understand Journey to the West? I didn't read it thoroughly, and the application seems blunt and rigid. The mystery in Journey to the West was not put to use, which is a pity.

This book is a non-brained novel. Nao Pei steals the Bodhisattva from the master, and no one knows anything; Nao Pei faces off, and scares his opponent to death with one sentence; Nao Pei follows Sun Wukong to heaven to become a god, and follows the monkeys in and out of the Lingxiao Palace, but no one in the sky notices it; Nao Pei steals the elixir, and the Supreme Lord actually writes down the cultivation techniques in a book and puts it in the elixir room, and lets the male protagonist secretly enjoy it. . . . Nao Pai stole the fairy peaches, saying that the 9,000-year-old flat peaches were of little use to him, so he stopped eating them after eating them. . . . All kinds of stupid things. . . . . If you read it without thinking, it is still a good book.

Really speechless! This book is too expensive! It's the same as grabbing money! A lot of money was spent accidentally!

It's so beautiful, I've read it no less than five or six times. Why is the rating here not high?

I just want to have some experience!

Alas, another mysterious article. .

I feel like a star, a level, but what the hell is the vague heavenly position? Isn't it better to use the original Celestial Immortal, Golden Immortal, Human Immortal and Daluo Golden Immortal? What the hell is the law? Isn't it from fantasy novels? Then there are only three saints? What about the Three Pure Ones? What about the Western Saints? Isn't the Jade Emperor's name Zhang Bairen? Who is Zhang Sheng? Didn't the Donghuang Bell disappear? How did it end up with Emperor Ziwei? I feel like the author even has a partial understanding of the immortal system.