China Entertainment: This Actor Comes from the Fairy World

The settings in the previous book were pretty good, why did this one take such a clichéd path? I have seen a lot of similar openings in Huayuwen, and the route in the previous one was very unique.

Cultivation of immortality is about cognition, knowledge, rules, and laws. Since the protagonist has become a mortal, he should not learn about the history of the earth, laws and regulations, and the maximum damage of weapons through books, otherwise he will not feel safe. In an unknown world, the protagonist still behaves like a novice, and the entertainment industry doesn't know whether he is still a cultivator of immortality. A cultivator of immortality at least has a superior IQ. The protagonist of your book feels dumb and does not know the simplest common sense. This is the biggest failure.

What a stupid book. Did you consider the sense of substitution when writing it as if everyone were fools? The first chapter is disgusting. Unless you suddenly travel through time and have no inherited memories, how could such an awesome protagonist pretend to be deaf and blind for more than 20 years and know nothing about the outside world? This is a flaw.

The content is okay and the writing is pretty good, but it's too ink-filled. You have written a total of 126 chapters so far, and I have seen 72 chapters. You haven't filmed a single TV series? Your outline seems pretty good, but the writing is too ink.

I've been raising it for a while, are you kidding me in the last 20 chapters, cultivating immortals, fighting over luck, are you messing around, don't you understand the gods? What the Three Pure Ones and Two Buddhas and Nuwa are fighting for is not just luck. Lao Tzu's Linglong Pagoda of Luck Merits and Hongmeng's Heavenly Ruler are all treasures of luck. Killing people is not related to cause and effect. Your millions of luck are gone. It doesn't matter, you are really awesome. Next time you are fighting for a role. Someone is plotting to clear your luck. Then what kind of immortal do you still want to be? You can't be an ordinary person.

The custom of not celebrating birthdays in the world of immortality is not to celebrate birthdays, right from the beginning? It took a thousand years of cultivation to become an immortal, but now you have become a genius, and you have lived for hundreds of thousands of years without becoming an immortal. Are you describing becoming an immortal as an immortal official position or a realm? In addition, the protagonist has been reborn for twenty years and still acts like a fool and doesn't understand anything. Are you kidding me?

Write a book that is all about politics and politics. If you really have that ability, why not write about actors or politics and law? Mother-in-law and mother-in-law have no meaning.

First of all, the author's writing style is very good. I have read fifty chapters. From the first chapter, I have to film a movie. It has been more than fifty chapters and I haven't started it yet. I can only say that the author's level of skill is as high as a three-story building.

The plot is like children playing house, the plot is like foot wraps

It's so boring. Not a single work is online. How many words do you have? Do you want to write 10 million words later?