
Douluo: Modify the Plot and All Members Begin to Abstract
by Fang Xiaoqi
About This Novel
The new book "Douluo: The plot has been revised, and everyone has begun to abstract!" Attention, with exclamation mark! Ye Fan traveled through Douluo and obtained a BUG-level golden finger, which allowed him to modify the plot. Tang San was awakening his martial spirit. Ye Fan turned Blue Silver Grass and Haotian Hammer into Blue Silver Hammer and Haotian Grass with his backhand. When Tang Hao saw these two martial spirits, he didn't know whether to use the hammer to protect the grass or the grass to protect the hammer. Tang San was deceived and was about to kneel down to worship Yu Xiaogang as his teacher, but Ye Fan backhandedly made changes...
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Official(176)Scraped 3d ago
The author is suitable for writing female videos
It's not suitable for men at all. This kind of fanfic is too weird. Zhu Zhuqing just didn't accept it and let Dai Mubai take advantage of it. I'm speechless.
Personal recommendation, although the protagonist of this book is male. But I still recommend letting girls watch it. As a boy, I can't stand it. The first few pictures made me sick to death. Tang San was indeed rehabilitated, but the method used was a bit disgusting. It completely portrays Tang San as a gay man. The key is that Tang San turned out to be. There was no reaction after proposing to Yu Xiaogang. She has always regarded Yu Xiaogang as her wife. This stuff is really disgusting. As a boy, I didn't find this book very enjoyable. It was somewhat disgusting and made me feel sick to my stomach. It's probably suitable for girls to watch.
Recommend some old books, there are plenty of them
"Douluo: If you change one word, all the characters will be ruined" Click on the book in the book title number to search for it If everyone has anything to say, the main one will listen to it.
Exposing his abilities without reservation, he wished that Yu Xiaogang knew that his underwear was the same color
Ma Hongjun's part really has a bad reputation.
Either don't write emotional dramas and focus on cheating the male characters, or simply implement becoming stronger to the end, regardless of gender, and cheat if you have points. It doesn't matter what the author thinks the protagonist thinks or what his personality is. What matters is what kind of character you express between the lines. The character of the protagonist I want to describe is completely different from what is actually shown. It gives me the impression that he is a robot executing a program. A completely soulless character is the protagonist. The only value of his existence is to implement these shitty modifications. He doesn't even think it is interesting. The other two biggest criticisms are that of Zhu Zhuqing, a worthless modification that allowed Zhu Zhuqing to take advantage of Dai Mubai, both on his thighs and on his back. I don't know what a female channel is like, but a female character in a male channel showing affection for the protagonist is basically equivalent to making a reservation. Even if she doesn't accept it, there is absolutely no possibility of allowing other male characters to touch her. I have already read the novel, and the female character I have a crush on has to be touched by others. The key is a character like Dai Mubai who is rotten from head to crotch. The other one is Ma Hongjun's part. I also saw in the comments that the character the author wanted to set was simply to become stronger, and everything else is just a tool, but I can clearly tell you that this is the poisonous point. I need something to speed up my practice. Can't I use a jade pendant to speed up my practice? Just like Zhu Zhuqing's part, since it is set as Xiao Wu, then Xiao Wu belongs to the protagonist by default. Ma Hongjun is even worse than Dai Mubai. Giving opportunities and random thoughts to such a disfavored character, even if it is rubbish that the protagonist does not like, is a cuckold plot. What's more, if the protagonist feels at ease, he should be responsible to the end. The rest is quite interesting. There is nothing unacceptable about pooping and peeing, but the character design of the protagonist is a bit too bad. I think it is said that the author is a female channel turned into a male channel. Maybe the thinking has not changed yet. I think that the poison resistance is quite high, but it still makes me sick.
No, this book is extremely poisonous. Not only is the plot disgusting. The taste is too strong. And the protagonist's brain doesn't work very well. They all became enemies with Tang San and the others, and sold out all the details about their soul skills. Just an idiot. I gave this book two stars before, and I think highly of him. I've only read Chapter 16 and I'm about to die of poison.
Mainly really disgusting, green turtle? I'm really speechless. If you don't accept it, don't be ambiguous. I hugged Xiao Wu and slept together every day for 6 years. In the end, Ma Hongjun wanted to pursue Xiao Wu, but the protagonist actually said it was casual? Then why don't you modify it directly to make Xiao Wu fall in love with Ma Hongjun? It's such a green turtle.
The protagonist is basically an idiot. The first part is well written, although there are some loopholes, but the second part is just too awkward for me to play.
Let's play a game
At the beginning of the game, a child, his life How to play, each floor represents one year old, please write down his plot this year.
The author who writes this kind of article has a somewhat twisted psychology. The whole story revolves around farts, shit, and gay men, and the protagonist is like a eunuch. Enter with caution.
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Official(176)Scraped 3d ago
The author is suitable for writing female videos
It's not suitable for men at all. This kind of fanfic is too weird. Zhu Zhuqing just didn't accept it and let Dai Mubai take advantage of it. I'm speechless.
Personal recommendation, although the protagonist of this book is male. But I still recommend letting girls watch it. As a boy, I can't stand it. The first few pictures made me sick to death. Tang San was indeed rehabilitated, but the method used was a bit disgusting. It completely portrays Tang San as a gay man. The key is that Tang San turned out to be. There was no reaction after proposing to Yu Xiaogang. She has always regarded Yu Xiaogang as her wife. This stuff is really disgusting. As a boy, I didn't find this book very enjoyable. It was somewhat disgusting and made me feel sick to my stomach. It's probably suitable for girls to watch.
Recommend some old books, there are plenty of them
"Douluo: If you change one word, all the characters will be ruined" Click on the book in the book title number to search for it If everyone has anything to say, the main one will listen to it.
Exposing his abilities without reservation, he wished that Yu Xiaogang knew that his underwear was the same color
Ma Hongjun's part really has a bad reputation.
Either don't write emotional dramas and focus on cheating the male characters, or simply implement becoming stronger to the end, regardless of gender, and cheat if you have points. It doesn't matter what the author thinks the protagonist thinks or what his personality is. What matters is what kind of character you express between the lines. The character of the protagonist I want to describe is completely different from what is actually shown. It gives me the impression that he is a robot executing a program. A completely soulless character is the protagonist. The only value of his existence is to implement these shitty modifications. He doesn't even think it is interesting. The other two biggest criticisms are that of Zhu Zhuqing, a worthless modification that allowed Zhu Zhuqing to take advantage of Dai Mubai, both on his thighs and on his back. I don't know what a female channel is like, but a female character in a male channel showing affection for the protagonist is basically equivalent to making a reservation. Even if she doesn't accept it, there is absolutely no possibility of allowing other male characters to touch her. I have already read the novel, and the female character I have a crush on has to be touched by others. The key is a character like Dai Mubai who is rotten from head to crotch. The other one is Ma Hongjun's part. I also saw in the comments that the character the author wanted to set was simply to become stronger, and everything else is just a tool, but I can clearly tell you that this is the poisonous point. I need something to speed up my practice. Can't I use a jade pendant to speed up my practice? Just like Zhu Zhuqing's part, since it is set as Xiao Wu, then Xiao Wu belongs to the protagonist by default. Ma Hongjun is even worse than Dai Mubai. Giving opportunities and random thoughts to such a disfavored character, even if it is rubbish that the protagonist does not like, is a cuckold plot. What's more, if the protagonist feels at ease, he should be responsible to the end. The rest is quite interesting. There is nothing unacceptable about pooping and peeing, but the character design of the protagonist is a bit too bad. I think it is said that the author is a female channel turned into a male channel. Maybe the thinking has not changed yet. I think that the poison resistance is quite high, but it still makes me sick.
No, this book is extremely poisonous. Not only is the plot disgusting. The taste is too strong. And the protagonist's brain doesn't work very well. They all became enemies with Tang San and the others, and sold out all the details about their soul skills. Just an idiot. I gave this book two stars before, and I think highly of him. I've only read Chapter 16 and I'm about to die of poison.
Mainly really disgusting, green turtle? I'm really speechless. If you don't accept it, don't be ambiguous. I hugged Xiao Wu and slept together every day for 6 years. In the end, Ma Hongjun wanted to pursue Xiao Wu, but the protagonist actually said it was casual? Then why don't you modify it directly to make Xiao Wu fall in love with Ma Hongjun? It's such a green turtle.
The protagonist is basically an idiot. The first part is well written, although there are some loopholes, but the second part is just too awkward for me to play.
Let's play a game
At the beginning of the game, a child, his life How to play, each floor represents one year old, please write down his plot this year.
The author who writes this kind of article has a somewhat twisted psychology. The whole story revolves around farts, shit, and gay men, and the protagonist is like a eunuch. Enter with caution.









