Be Serious, This is a Cultivator!

It has a novel theme and interesting setting, but it is unfortunately ruined by mediocre supporting characters and plot. The supporting character of Sikong Yu at the beginning turned this supposedly interesting novel into an extremely mediocre novel. Without this supporting character, the protagonist's performance and plot could be greatly improved. For example, if the protagonist goes into the city alone and meets the guard, he will write something funny, use some funny method to sneak in, etc. This way the plot will be much more interesting, but Sikong Yu makes this part gradually become dull and boring. If it were me, I would kill Sikong Yu right from the start, or let him be corrupted by evil spirits, so as to highlight the performance of the protagonist. The biggest fear in novels that focus on comedy is that the supporting characters deprive the protagonist of his performance and limit the protagonist's performance, causing the supposedly happy plot to gradually become boring. For example, in the more interesting nonsensical comedy novels "Shadow Powerful Person" and "Otome Games Are Very Unfriendly to Passerby Characters" in recent years, you can find that they all focus on the protagonist's performance, and will describe the protagonist's psychological drama in large quantities, and then try to minimize those supporting actors who will limit the protagonist's performance and performance. But your current supporting role of Sikong Yu affects the performance of the protagonist, and there is almost no psychological drama for the protagonist. As a result, you are positioned to be funny, and the setting that is supposed to make people happy turns out to be boring to watch, especially the beginning of chapters 3 to 6, which is supposed to be golden. It is boring. It can persuade readers to quit, and the reason for boredom is this supporting character. It is really embarrassing. I really hope that there are fewer such supporting characters in today's novels. It is almost 2024. This kind of supporting characters really affects the performance of the protagonist. At least there is no need for such characters in funny novels.

It is said that in fairy tales, those who lie to the river god will have their belongings confiscated. Although it is useless, it can be used.

Worth a look. The writing is pretty good. Ah

The author's writing style gives people the feeling that the world was created by me and the protagonist just takes back his own things.