Space Users in the Martial Arts World

I won't say the word water. Since he traveled to the past, he should know that Yue Buqun and his wife raised him. Something should change. Rather than narrating the original work. It's probably because I'm afraid that it will change too much and deviate from the original work. It would be difficult to write without reference.

Your butt is crooked. There is nothing wrong with you liking bold men and holy aunts from the Demon Cult, but you help them deal with people from the same camp. Where do you put the Huashan Sect and where do you put the Yue Buqun couple? There is Linghu Chong and you. I am satisfied with your retarded and dog-licking plot.

The protagonists are too nosy, like Linghu Chong and Ren Yingying, who are easy to get together, and take everything on themselves, so speechless. Moreover, they clearly have invincible strength, but they have to imitate the original work and pass through five levels and kill six generals while pretending to be pigs. They are not at all as cool as time-travelers, and the creativity and settings can only be seen. .

The first two are okay, but what the hell is the third one about "Shooting the Condor", especially the part about Yang Kang Wanyan Honglie, it's disgusting, the beautification of the Golden Dog really made me vomit.

Your spatial ability is too weak. If you find a good Qinggong practitioner and learn the skill of empty hand, your spatial ability will be useless.

Summary: You will always fall into trouble with women, and you will never be able to live without women. All troubles arise because of women, and all plots revolve around women and relationships. The protagonist's character thinks he is a love-struck type, but it's actually disgusting

Just say it once or twice on your WeChat official account. If not, you can just write it in the introduction. You said it in every one of them. This is very offensive, you know? You're obviously just talking about word count.

The back part is boring. Because the beginning, middle, and end are all the same.

The first world is Swordsman, I don't want to talk about the plot, just think of it as the protagonist's novice village! The story of the second world, Heaven-Slaying Dragon, is too confusing! The protagonist of the first life has lived for more than a hundred years, and even married Yue Lingshan. Haven't you seen through the love affair between men and women? The second life gave the male protagonist a whole love tribulation. Author, do you think the character of the protagonist, a hundred-year-old man, needs to survive the love tribulation? Author, you are so lustful, what are you doing with all those bells and whistles? Either the protagonist can cut off the love thread directly with the sword of wisdom, cut it off when it is necessary, and concentrate on the road! Either the protagonist just opens a harem, and those women can be taken in if they want, decisively! The most disgusting thing is this kind of plot, using love robbery as a shield, pretending and standing up, acting coquettishly, like a girl, very undecisive! Is this the character of a centenarian old man? Did you live as a dog in your last life? The character of the protagonist is a complete mess! Really poisonous!

You are basically plagiarizing. You are following the exact same path as the original protagonist. You are writing a fan novel or it is impossible to determine the character of a character. Linghu Chong in Swordsman is really unlikable and can only be described as debauched. Also, the original book only covers a corner of the world. Can you not copy the plot?