The Heart of Fantasy Begins with Swallowing

Forcibly set up the ultimate wandering path, the ultimate illusion path, and the ultimate killing path! Ji You said that the movement is fast, so it should be due to speed, light, thunder, etc. Can be expressed. What kind of ghost way is You? The fantasy path tends to affect the soul, which is one of the soul paths. Since the killing path talks about attack, it belongs to the branch of destruction! I had to create my own nouns, and the description was nondescript! With the word "ji", it feels very powerful! What about the Dark Heavenly Dao? Heavenly Dao is a general term, which is equivalent to a collection of rules in a region. If you can create a combination of a large number of rules like Heavenly Dao, you still need to understand a shitty way. For example, you have created equations, and you still say that you don't understand addition, subtraction, multiplication and division. It is just a random setting that you take for granted, without considering any logic. You also like to engage in schizophrenia, and you have a Life Fire Cult to deal with yourself. Your imagination is really invincible! !

I was speechless and confused as I watched it. I couldn't understand what it was about. The author must have drunk too much and then wrote this messy fan fiction because of his random thoughts. After reading so many, this one made me confused.

The protagonist you wrote is really useless, and he can't even tell the difference between reality and fiction. Damn it, practicing something and sacrificing a treasure can make you almost die. And it's the kind that has exhausted its lifespan. What the hell are you doing to cause a calamity of fate? Why don't you do a calamity of heaven? After all, you even brought out Emperor Huangtian. Just come and be struck by lightning every day, just follow the method of covering the sky. The people I went to see were really depressed to death. You said you were slow in cultivation and let it go, but in the end you said it was a dream. I haven't thought about all the plots, so why did you write it in Luo Feng's era? Well, good. The Fengyi Realm Master who he treated like a mother before came out of the illusion and treated himself as an ordinary disciple. If he could break through, he would treat himself as an immortal subordinate. It didn't matter if he didn't. Damn it, he gave his sincerity, but it turned out to be a piece of shit. Very fun, right?

I knew my writing was poor, and because I was mentally depressed at the time, it was even worse. But aren't the books already on the shelves for free viewing? Plus, they've been finished a long time ago, so there's no need to flog them. Please 🙏 Although I have long accepted the fact, it still hurts to be scolded from time to time, especially since I can't revise a book that has been completed long ago, right?

The real protagonist has obviously never experienced death and has no skills. However, he still feels that there is nothing wrong here. He feels that he has not exerted all his power and is just like those cultivation geniuses in the fantasy world who are trashed after being hit once.

When it came to Snow Eagle, I felt disgusting. I was forced to increase the number of enemies, and then began to suppress the protagonist and the sadist. Do you have masochistic tendencies? Reading novels is not just mindless reading, it is still fan fiction. It is supposed to be more relaxed, but it turns out that the writing is tortured and tortured. The second setting is okay in the end, but you have too many ideas of your own. Isn't it good to write original works with these ideas?

It's illogical, even the second design is outrageous

I can't understand anything the author writes, and there's no logic in what he writes.

The protagonist obviously feels very strong, but the performance to me is very damn weak. Even though you have level 100 strength, you forcefully dealt me ​​level 50 damage.

Just write about Devouring the Starry Sky! What the hell is going on in Chapter 86? Why are you going to Lord Snow Eagle?