Plan for the World

It may be that the group of animals in the historical area of ​​Qidian Men's Video have spoiled the taste, so it feels average. Although it is about power and strategy, it is a pity that the taste of the world is not written. It seems that it is still an inner house. There are too many gaps in historical knowledge. "Ignorance is not an excuse for laziness." Don't get involved in the male channel's conspiracy before this New Year, it will lose popularity. I suggest the author sister to read Ruzi Emperor, Conspiracy to Conquer Nine Provinces, Return to the Ming Dynasty to Become a Foolish Emperor, Official of Qin, Han Que, Night Walk in Jin Yi, The First Minister of the Ming Dynasty, Survival in the Late Ming Dynasty, etc.

It can be seen that the writing style, plot logic, and portrayal of people's hearts are all very good. As a long-time reader of the historical district who has been a novice in reading, I should have enjoyed reading the book, but after reading more than ten chapters, I just felt very tired. I thought about it carefully and there are two reasons: First, I have no sense of history. I am more or less interested in history when reading historical articles. If your background is based on real history and you give the protagonist a very clear position (what he wants to do), then the historical atmosphere will be full and very attractive. If it is an imaginary world background, the protagonist's positioning is clear enough, or the description of the machinations and wars is very attractive, or if you add elements such as Qinggong and internal strength, it will also have a sense of historical atmosphere. Second, a large amount of your pages are devoted to all kinds of men's house fights and officialdom fights, which is very boring. Most of the men's house fights are appetizers or plot supplements that break the game at the beginning. In officialdom fights, you have to cooperate with the protagonist's cheating (such as copying poems, using the prophet's advantage, playing with technology, etc.), Otherwise writing this kind of thing will really not attract male readers. It was originally a fiction. The main character's starting goal was to talk about saving the people and conquering the world in general terms. There was no sense of historical atmosphere at all. A large number of plots were simply about the struggle between people's hearts, without any excitement and attraction. Therefore, even if his writing was really good and his grasp of people's hearts was really perfect, it lacked appeal to male readers in historical areas. Even because there were too many descriptions of the struggle between people's hearts, it would make them tired. So I have some suggestions. If you want to attract more male readers, firstly, use IP, that is, you must have a historical atmosphere and arouse readers' historical feelings. You can write about the Han, Three Kingdoms, Tang, Song, and Ming Dynasties, as well as the less popular two Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, and the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Second, you have to write about time travel and give the author some reasonable tricks. If you feel that the text is too vulgar and unreasonable, you can write something reasonable. For example, the background of the Song Dynasty uses the knowledge of the Ming Dynasty, which is refreshing but not obtrusive.

I feel that the writing is very in-depth. You need to think about it when you read it. Big books are different from other books and cannot be read directly as cool or sweet stories. Really, most of the actions of the characters in the novel are related to interests and fit the character setting. I know Dadai from Yanagi and Ikkyu's book. I really like that book. I read it many times and cried many times. This is the most sober Gong Douwen with a female protagonist I have ever read. This time, he changed his style and wrote a male channel. Support!

Hiss ~ a rare female author who switched from a female channel to a male channel! Very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Su Nancheng's sobriety is really unique. He has the feeling that I am sober when the whole world is dirty, and I am sober when everyone is drunk. He has a really good character.

Su Nancheng satirized the imperial court for its weakness, but did he really have the desire to be king and hegemon? If it was just to fight against injustice, there would be no need to do so in court.

Su Nancheng had only been in the industry for a year, but before he knew it, he already owned two or three houses, gathered a few loyal followers, established a wild father-son relationship with the general, and had a good relationship with the young marquis. The springboard of the prince is a thing of the past. Su Nancheng was willing to be injured and successfully hugged the emperor's thick legs. After rescuing Jiang Nan, Su Nancheng could advance, attack, retreat or defend, taking both sides. If the rebels move slowly, Xiao Su can continue to climb up to accumulate his own strength. If the rebels are unstoppable, Xiao Su will simply lead the wild father to abandon the dark side and join the bright side, changing dynasties and jointly resisting foreign enemies. This is a huge achievement achieved by a fifteen-year-old boy in more than a year. The most difficult thing on a person's road to success is to go from 0 to 1. With that one, the subsequent efforts will be meaningful. Therefore, a man must have a career so that he can socialize and expand his network. Being an otaku doesn't even allow you to tease a pretty girl😘😘😘

I like Fengzhu-kun so much🥰son~ You have to be nicer to my daughter-in-law🤓

Su Nancheng is capable. Everyone saw red roses in their eyes and gold and jade in the hall, but he saw the truth behind it. Thoughts are rare in the nest of wealth.

The money is as bright as the rabbit, and the money is rising by billions every day! Wish you, wish me, wish everyone!