Da Qin Arrested the Alchemist, What Does it Have to Do with My Qi Refiner?
About This Novel
Became the only immortal in pre-Qin Dynasty. There is no time to hide from the world in the mountains, and it is considered comfortable to enlighten and practice. In order to make elixirs, magic is used to drive all kinds of beasts to collect spiritual herbs. In return, the scriptures often echo in the mountains, preaching to all souls. Until one day, a minister in the Xianyang court advised him, so the First Emperor ordered the massacre of all the imperial warriors in the world. Meng Tian led the officers and soldiers to arrest them all the way, but unexpectedly encountered a strange scene while passing through a mountain...
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When writing a novel, write it well. I really thought that the ancients were just talking in words. I am speechless! Does it appear that your literary skills are high? What a big statement! The whole article is nonsense (눈_눈). The subject matter is okay, but what is it written about?
I'm sorry, I couldn't write the key points in a long time. The plot advancement is ridiculously slow. The description of the characters' words and deeds are neither ancient nor current. To use an analogy, it feels like plastic Mandarin mixed with dialects and Mandarin. The author's understanding of historical characters is also a bit outrageous. The parts are awkward and dark, and some historical figures are described like idiots. The only ones who can read it are probably ninjas. It is obviously a novel with the protagonist as the core, but the protagonist is not visible for a long time. The writing is like an era novel. In summary, it seems terrible to old bookworms, and I am afraid that new bookworms will not be able to read it.
It all depends on your damn imagination, can you give me some useful information? Moreover, the First Emperor is not the other founding emperor, and the prince doesn't even know how to balance it with you. When will you like Hu Hai?
Highly not recommended
1. Da Qin, Da Qin, you wrote and wrote and went to other dynasties 2. Is the humanistic description more to the point? Ying Zheng may have been a bit iron-blooded in the long history, but he is not a fool or murderous. 3. You told me that cultivating immortality itself is going against the will of heaven. Then why are you telling me that the Qin Dynasty has exhausted its energy and is stretched to its limit? 4. Do you think that as a normal person, you would believe the fact that Langxie came out with such a huge dragon? What's more, it's Ying Zheng who holds great power. 5. The dialogue is a bit awkward😳😳😳 6. In my opinion, the protagonist has always been creating a sense of mystery to pretend to be 13, and he still has the nerve to say that Xu Fu has forgotten his true intention of practicing cultivation. I want to laugh when I see him.
It's so verbose, and the protagonist has never used it until now.
This novel should be changed to "You and I are both licking dogs, my strength comes from your imagination"
330,000 words and more than 100 chapters. Other novels don't know how much the main plot has been done. If you write it like this, the main plot has not been advanced very much. You have been writing the story of Qin Shihuang and his traitors and traitors. It has not been finished yet. If you want to write slowly, you should publish more chapters. One chapter a day, and you can't see any progress in a week🙃
The story is written by a brainless idiot, and the supporting character's halo of reducing intelligence is too serious.
The book is considered very poisonous and cannot be shaken by Liuwei Dihuang Pills.
You really dare to write and describe the whole state of Qin without even a single good thing. I can only say that this is not about your writing. You have no writing ability at all!
The author's writing is really convoluted, and he is completely wrong as he writes, 😜😜
What are you writing about? It's all just mindless slander
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Official(218)Scraped 3d ago
When writing a novel, write it well. I really thought that the ancients were just talking in words. I am speechless! Does it appear that your literary skills are high? What a big statement! The whole article is nonsense (눈_눈). The subject matter is okay, but what is it written about?
I'm sorry, I couldn't write the key points in a long time. The plot advancement is ridiculously slow. The description of the characters' words and deeds are neither ancient nor current. To use an analogy, it feels like plastic Mandarin mixed with dialects and Mandarin. The author's understanding of historical characters is also a bit outrageous. The parts are awkward and dark, and some historical figures are described like idiots. The only ones who can read it are probably ninjas. It is obviously a novel with the protagonist as the core, but the protagonist is not visible for a long time. The writing is like an era novel. In summary, it seems terrible to old bookworms, and I am afraid that new bookworms will not be able to read it.
It all depends on your damn imagination, can you give me some useful information? Moreover, the First Emperor is not the other founding emperor, and the prince doesn't even know how to balance it with you. When will you like Hu Hai?
Highly not recommended
1. Da Qin, Da Qin, you wrote and wrote and went to other dynasties 2. Is the humanistic description more to the point? Ying Zheng may have been a bit iron-blooded in the long history, but he is not a fool or murderous. 3. You told me that cultivating immortality itself is going against the will of heaven. Then why are you telling me that the Qin Dynasty has exhausted its energy and is stretched to its limit? 4. Do you think that as a normal person, you would believe the fact that Langxie came out with such a huge dragon? What's more, it's Ying Zheng who holds great power. 5. The dialogue is a bit awkward😳😳😳 6. In my opinion, the protagonist has always been creating a sense of mystery to pretend to be 13, and he still has the nerve to say that Xu Fu has forgotten his true intention of practicing cultivation. I want to laugh when I see him.
It's so verbose, and the protagonist has never used it until now.
This novel should be changed to "You and I are both licking dogs, my strength comes from your imagination"
330,000 words and more than 100 chapters. Other novels don't know how much the main plot has been done. If you write it like this, the main plot has not been advanced very much. You have been writing the story of Qin Shihuang and his traitors and traitors. It has not been finished yet. If you want to write slowly, you should publish more chapters. One chapter a day, and you can't see any progress in a week🙃
The story is written by a brainless idiot, and the supporting character's halo of reducing intelligence is too serious.
The book is considered very poisonous and cannot be shaken by Liuwei Dihuang Pills.
You really dare to write and describe the whole state of Qin without even a single good thing. I can only say that this is not about your writing. You have no writing ability at all!
The author's writing is really convoluted, and he is completely wrong as he writes, 😜😜
What are you writing about? It's all just mindless slander
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