I Am in Douluo, and My Awakening Time is Zero at the Beginning

Could it be that configuration again? After teaching Zhu Zhuqing the power, he became obsessed with the protagonist. Ning Rongrong found the protagonist interesting and became deeply involved in it, unable to extricate himself. He and Qian Renxue plotted against each other, and finally embraced the beautiful woman. He met and had an affair with Hu Liena by chance, and traveled back in time and space to rescue Bibi Dong. If I really wrote it like this... It would feel so boring. You can try other characters. Ye Lingling in the original work is pretty good (mainly because no one wrote it), but it's up to the author to decide how to do it. Anyway, I'm just giving advice. If my opinion is really adopted, then I would prefer the original heroine (because it's really fresh). The rest is up to the author. Anyway, if the writing suits my taste, I will naturally support it. If it doesn't suit my taste, I won't say much and just turn around and walk away without leaving a single cloud behind.

Although many people now hate the master, part of his theory is not wrong (it is not wrong because he copied the Wuhun Palace, it is the default truth). The level of innate soul power is linked to the martial soul. The higher the level, the stronger the martial soul. But look at what the author wrote. The martial soul is a dragon, but the soul power is level one? What, you are the second master? The martial soul of the master is also like this because the martial soul left the body and degenerated into a pig. The soul power brought by the dragon's martial soul is at least level 5-6, and you still have level 1. Hehe

You can't break it by gua sha. Luffy, King of Shampoo Land, meets Kaido

The majestic Black King has done some sneaky things. His style of conduct should be more like that of Chu Zihang.

I don't understand what's so fussy about this, so what if there's a harem, what if there's a single female protagonist? Whose business is it bothering? Some people like to watch it, and some people don't, so what? There is no shortage of people like you, right? Also, what about creating your own heroine? Do you think it's easy to create your own heroine? Even if you design your own heroine, no matter how good it is, what's the use? Who will read it? Even if there are a few of them, why do they come to read fan fiction? Do you really think it's just to watch your own heroine? Isn't it? He can't walk when he sees a woman. Even if he can't walk when he sees a woman, so what, what man doesn't like beautiful women? Only an incompetent man would tolerate his ugly wife, right? Isn't there reality? Isn't it Principal Wang? If you change girlfriends in a few days, if not in a few days, then definitely in a few months, who cares? Who told him to be rich, right? Don't say that my three views are not correct. Whoever's three views are correct? You also have three views, and others also have three views. Who cares about your three views? Who else cares about my views? If you have strength, your three views will be righteous; if you don't have strength, your three views will be incorrect, isn't it?

One thing I don't understand is, why should I go to Notting College? Knowing what kind of person Tang San is, why would he go to Notting Academy? It's uncomfortable. Moreover, he can spread the news about the hundred thousand year spirit beast and Tang Hao. There will definitely be a lot of people besieging Tang Hao. Firstly, they can make it difficult for the Shrek Seven Monsters to gather together, and secondly, they can make everyone Lu and Wuhundian are chasing after them. I believe that they can get a hundred thousand year soul bone or soul ring, and can please Wuhundian. There will definitely be a lot of people taking action. If they fail to kill with a borrowed knife, they can disgust Tang San and the others, and then find an opportunity to destroy the Blue Silver King. How will they play?

At first glance, I haven't fully read Dragon Clan. The Black King controls all the Word Spirits. I see that you have been writing about Jun Yan. Even if he becomes the Black King, he is still Jun Yan (Word Spirit Ranking 89). If you read the book carefully, you will know that there are similar Word Spirits that are more powerful than Jun Yan. There are also Zhulong (Word Spirit Ranking 114), and there are many more powerful than Judgment (111), such as Shiva Ye. Wu (117), you wrote the Black King too weak. As an all-element dragon king, do you have to use cold weapons and your body when killing Tang San? Especially since Tang San was not truly stable at that time. The reason why the Black King used cold weapons when fighting the White King was because they were both full-element dragon kings. Also, you wrote Tang San in such a way that he looked like an idiot. It's hard to explain.

While the protagonist is practicing, Xiao Wu goes for a sneak attack. What do you think? According to the way you write it, Xiao Chenyu in the original novel will probably die like a dog, and Zhao Wuji will probably die as well! And there's Ma Hongjun, you can't be so mean to him until he dies! After all, people who have no grievances and no grudges can forcibly make enemies like that. Ma Hongjun offended Xiao Wu and Tang San, so it's no big deal!

I feel like the main character has too few roles, and there are all sorts of hidden characters. Dragon Clan doesn't have any high-profile scenes now, and only has some supporting roles.

It's such a holy lady to still care about other people's children in troubled times. I don't like the character of the protagonist. Why should I be angry when I see other people abducting children? In a world where human life is worthless, it is best to mind your own business and fight against injustices. Any injustice you feel is a disrespect for your own life.