Immortal Cultivator Travels Through Sword and Magic
by It Tastes Great, No Need For Too Much Salt, Right?
About This Novel
The time traveler becomes a powerful person in the world of immortality, and then unexpectedly comes to the world of sword and magic, and everything starts over. The system of cultivating immortals collides with the alien continent, and the strong men in the tribulation period embark on the path of cultivation again. What is hidden in the continent tens of thousands of years ago, and why do all the strong men stop moving forward? Looking at the three ancient tribes in Wu Yangyang, Lin Mo's sword flashed across the nineteen states, and a battle with the ancient races and the world began.
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
There are too many places that stretch the crotch, I will tell you directly to prevent everyone from wasting time
First: You have reached the pinnacle of immortality in your 30s and transcended tribulations (normally living for thousands or tens of thousands of years is the keynote of immortality novels, unless the world changes dramatically). The next step is to become an immortal. When you describe it like this, your novel's combat power has actually collapsed. 2: This is the third time traveling to the magical world. The protagonist is like an NPC who doesn't understand anything and has a very low level of intelligence. There are other characters who are also inexplicable. In the first chapter, you have already written that there are beggars on the street, and most of them are in groups. The protagonist inexplicably enters someone else's. In the team, people discuss it casually and then show kindness. The more pitiful people on the street are like blind people. They don't help those who are more pitiful. The protagonist also joins directly as if he has no precautions. Even in modern times on earth, a ten-year-old child has at least a minimum of precautions.
Why not write about a magician traveling through the world of cultivating immortals?
The content is good, keep up the good work, I believe you
It's clearly written about how powerful the protagonist is in the world of immortality, and then he travels through the mind, but it's the same as the anti-inflammatory when he was a child. It's not good to write like this.
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
There are too many places that stretch the crotch, I will tell you directly to prevent everyone from wasting time
First: You have reached the pinnacle of immortality in your 30s and transcended tribulations (normally living for thousands or tens of thousands of years is the keynote of immortality novels, unless the world changes dramatically). The next step is to become an immortal. When you describe it like this, your novel's combat power has actually collapsed. 2: This is the third time traveling to the magical world. The protagonist is like an NPC who doesn't understand anything and has a very low level of intelligence. There are other characters who are also inexplicable. In the first chapter, you have already written that there are beggars on the street, and most of them are in groups. The protagonist inexplicably enters someone else's. In the team, people discuss it casually and then show kindness. The more pitiful people on the street are like blind people. They don't help those who are more pitiful. The protagonist also joins directly as if he has no precautions. Even in modern times on earth, a ten-year-old child has at least a minimum of precautions.
Why not write about a magician traveling through the world of cultivating immortals?
The content is good, keep up the good work, I believe you
It's clearly written about how powerful the protagonist is in the world of immortality, and then he travels through the mind, but it's the same as the anti-inflammatory when he was a child. It's not good to write like this.
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