Beast Control Immortality: I Can Extract Blood

The typical beggar only deserves to be friends with beggars. Can you make the protagonist speak upright and have some character? You must know that a group of golden immortals and immortal golden immortals in the sect behind the protagonist are supporting the protagonist, and the result is like this😋 To put it bluntly, you are like this. Not only is it disrespectful to yourself, but it is also disrespectful to the group of people behind you who support you! If you lower your friends' feelings towards you, are the people who support you willing to let you bow your head and talk to ants (in the eyes of golden immortals and immortal golden immortals, immortals are ants)? ! This is the reason why I gave it three stars. The character description is really poor!

At any rate, his identity was established, and he accepted disciples in a small world of mortals without considering his potential. He completely collapsed and looked really uninteresting. (If you want to see if it reaches more than 100, then withdraw)

You write hi to yourself, right? The sect was so powerful before but was defeated by a Zerg. Is there no one who can practice the way of heaven? My own territory has been kept under development for three thousand years. There's also the plot about the Shura clan.

I haven't read much, so I'll tell you my thoughts on the first few pictures. First of all, it is disgusting to abbreviate similar low-grade/medium-grade/high-grade spiritual stones as low-grade/middle-grade spiritual stones. It is also called to prevent being criticized. I have read online articles for ten years and no one has said this to calculate the number of words. There are also various typos. Didn't you check them after you finished writing? Or are you just not good enough to write so many typos? Some parts of the description are inappropriate. At the beginning of the chapter, I earned 30 middle-grade spiritual stones from selling goods and used them to buy other things. But later on, I ended up going back with 30 medium-grade spiritual stones? It's so abstract. Where did all the spiritual stones come from? Is it still not changed even though someone has suggested it? Also, a simple title like Junior Brother Chen could be written as Senior Brother Chen at first, with a few lines separating it. The most outrageous thing is the worldview. It's very open but he doesn't say it. He only mentions it when he thinks about it.

Why not extract human blood and rejuvenate yourself?

Can you not write the protagonist so weak every time! I can understand that you respect the immortals, but with the protagonist's method, can't you stand up straight and talk to the immortals?! It really affects the readers' senses. Forget it once or twice, if it happens every time, it will be like kneeling down to salute! What's wrong with your background? Not the backstage?! The means of cultivating beast masters in you are not means, and I don't ask too much. Can you stand up straight and talk to the immortals normally! After all, in this book, the immortals are just cheap!!! What's more, there are a bunch of golden immortals behind the protagonist! Immortal golden immortals! Aren't you making the readers unhappy? ! The monthly votes that I originally liked are true, and I am a little hesitant about this kind of weak protagonist. I gradually lose my love for this kind of weak protagonist! There is a serious problem with the character description of your protagonist. The originally gentle protagonist really feels weak to me, close to cowardice, especially when he is with some cabbage real fairy, he can't stand straight at all! 😋

Why did he suddenly become a eunuch? Abstract

Don't look for Taoist companions to thank you. I feel like there are signs of this in more than a hundred chapters. Don't write it. I suggest you write it and write it to death. Otherwise, this book will really be lowered.

Although I have only read a few dozen chapters, I can't count the number of typos, missing words, or extra words, which really affects my reading! ! Can the author go back and fix it when he has time?

Xiaobai, it's too white, there are too many typos, you haven't proofread it, right? It was tiring to read, and there were grammatical errors in many places. The preface and the follower were inconsistent, and the writing was incomprehensible. The reading experience is very poor.