Simultaneous Travel: It's All Hell Beginning

It was originally good, but Peerless has risen, but you and others still suppress it, grow first and drive the others, and they can quickly reach the top of the current world. If you don't let me upgrade, are you kidding me? You are so poisonous, I am speechless

The ones with the least ability to fight are actually pirates. On the other hand, peerless... Maybe this is the gold content of fantasy floor tiles. The original setting is here. If it is set high, it will be criticized, and if it is set low, it will be criticized even more. It is also difficult for the author. All I can say is don't choose this kind of world with contradictory settings next time.

A few months have passed after more than 40 chapters, and it's still the same three? ? ?

I took a brief look at it. It was fine before it was put on the shelves, but it was hard to say anything about it after it was put on the shelves. As a 99 streamer, I have not grasped the rhythm well. So far (270 chapters), there are less than 10 worlds. The Douluo chapter is very confusing, the story line is a mess, Ao Tian and Gou Daoliu are mixed together, it is very messy. Moreover, Naruto, there is too much space in the world of Pirates. What you are writing is 99 flow, not two realms crossing! Douluo has already collapsed, and it would be outrageous to still hang around in these two without opening a few new worlds. The progress is slow. It's over 500,000 words, and the introduction hasn't been sent back yet. It's a bit too slow. Generally speaking, it is average. The 99 series did not grasp the rhythm well, the Douluo chapter narrative is confusing, and Naruto One Piece has too much description. It can only be said to be mediocre, but as a novice it's still okay, come on!

It started to suppress its combat power even before it was put on the shelves. I don't dare to think about what to do after it is put on the shelves. Also, the plot line is a bit confusing. The original 99 series had this stinky problem. Nowadays, people who write about same-sex games generally pay attention to it and find ways to avoid this problem. The author is good... But he has made it more prosperous. At the beginning, the three worlds were fine, and they could be easily controlled. The three perspectives switched back and forth at the same time, and the plot development was interlocking. In a sense, this writing was an advantage. As a result, after the protagonist Da Feng appeared, it became four worlds, and it was immediately difficult to control the rhythm. There were only four worlds. Wouldn't it be more difficult to control more worlds in the future? Wouldn't the author consider clarifying the plot line?

You can abandon it From four stars to five stars to two stars, three book reviews and three ratings. This is my most authentic perception and mentality after reading this book.

It's best to lower the score so that everyone doesn't get poisoned.

What should I write after Chapter 163? If the author is not up to the level, just write as I say. It has to be difficult. Do you have that ability?

It is impossible for the evil soul master to have that kind of brain

The author doesn't even mention the level of soul power the protagonist has. There are many soul power cards that I haven't written down yet. I'll mark the number of chakra cards.