Fox Demon: There is No Limit to Liver, I Can See the Proficiency
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Luo Tian traveled to the world of the fox demon Little Matchmaker and became a servant of the Li family of the Taoist League. I wanted to be content with the status quo, but I didn't expect to see proficiency. No matter how hard you work, you will gain something! Even if it is just a boxing technique practiced by ordinary people that can only strengthen the body, it will eventually be able to control the sky with fists! . . . . . . "Hey, why are you working so hard to practice boxing?" A girl with red hair looked at the sweating Luo Tian with curiosity and confusion.
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Official(137)Scraped 23d ago
Listen to me, first of all, you need to read this book. You must have a body that is immune to all poisons. My old man, this poison, my body that is invulnerable to all poisons is completely invincible. Fellow Taoists, this is how I felt after reading this book. You can read it and feel it carefully.
How should I put it? Now that I have a golden finger, I am still a slave, and it still gives people the feeling of being a slave voluntarily.
Too far apart
It feels like the author hasn't read the original drama or the original comic and just made a mess of it. The various plots don't match the characters and they are no longer the same person.
What are you writing about? Why did it end up in Sword Art Online?
It feels like a second setting has been added. The human race relies on magic weapons. Without magic weapons, you can't produce magic power. How can you use mental methods to produce skills? The Shenhuo Manor relies on pure Yangyan fire to practice. How come anyone can practice it? Doesn't Jin Renfeng just have no fire of his own and rely on the Dongfang family to provide fire every time? After the injection, replenishing is like refueling, otherwise why would there be a blood transfusion. Are the thoughts of each family connected with each other? How come the Li family has several other mental methods and can practice it openly? After reading more than ten chapters, it feels awkward.
This chapter has to be
I don't want to comment on others, just this, send it out
The author looks at me
In fact, if the protagonist really wants to open a harem, he can die once and then have no contact with the reincarnated demon in the early stage and fall in love with other demons first. When the reputation of the male protagonist spreads, the reincarnated demon comes to ask for someone, but he sees the male protagonist reincarnated. , The dying male protagonist lost his life for the banshee. When the two of them came to reincarnate in the Bitter Love Tree to renew their relationship, the female protagonist did not stop them. It was cruel and satisfying, and she could also find a reason to open a harem. The subsequent plot can also be longer, but the plot is too fast now.
The writing breaks through the second level, and the result is level 1 (98/100). There is no bottleneck in writing, but the result will take another year to break through. There is no such thing as an experience system. What is the purpose of writing a system.
Hasn't the author read the Fox Demon Southern Chapter? The Beishan Demon Emperor didn't come out at that time. At that time, Shi Kuan was still a slave from the Southern Kingdom. At that time, the Southern Demons had not yet risen, and they were all slaves from the Southern Kingdom. The first part was OK, but the later Southern Chapter felt like ghostwriting
very good
Very good, very good, very good, very good
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Official(137)Scraped 23d ago
Listen to me, first of all, you need to read this book. You must have a body that is immune to all poisons. My old man, this poison, my body that is invulnerable to all poisons is completely invincible. Fellow Taoists, this is how I felt after reading this book. You can read it and feel it carefully.
How should I put it? Now that I have a golden finger, I am still a slave, and it still gives people the feeling of being a slave voluntarily.
Too far apart
It feels like the author hasn't read the original drama or the original comic and just made a mess of it. The various plots don't match the characters and they are no longer the same person.
What are you writing about? Why did it end up in Sword Art Online?
It feels like a second setting has been added. The human race relies on magic weapons. Without magic weapons, you can't produce magic power. How can you use mental methods to produce skills? The Shenhuo Manor relies on pure Yangyan fire to practice. How come anyone can practice it? Doesn't Jin Renfeng just have no fire of his own and rely on the Dongfang family to provide fire every time? After the injection, replenishing is like refueling, otherwise why would there be a blood transfusion. Are the thoughts of each family connected with each other? How come the Li family has several other mental methods and can practice it openly? After reading more than ten chapters, it feels awkward.
This chapter has to be
I don't want to comment on others, just this, send it out
The author looks at me
In fact, if the protagonist really wants to open a harem, he can die once and then have no contact with the reincarnated demon in the early stage and fall in love with other demons first. When the reputation of the male protagonist spreads, the reincarnated demon comes to ask for someone, but he sees the male protagonist reincarnated. , The dying male protagonist lost his life for the banshee. When the two of them came to reincarnate in the Bitter Love Tree to renew their relationship, the female protagonist did not stop them. It was cruel and satisfying, and she could also find a reason to open a harem. The subsequent plot can also be longer, but the plot is too fast now.
The writing breaks through the second level, and the result is level 1 (98/100). There is no bottleneck in writing, but the result will take another year to break through. There is no such thing as an experience system. What is the purpose of writing a system.
Hasn't the author read the Fox Demon Southern Chapter? The Beishan Demon Emperor didn't come out at that time. At that time, Shi Kuan was still a slave from the Southern Kingdom. At that time, the Southern Demons had not yet risen, and they were all slaves from the Southern Kingdom. The first part was OK, but the later Southern Chapter felt like ghostwriting
very good
Very good, very good, very good, very good
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