Fight! after Breaking Off the Engagement, Yun Yun Comes to Visit with Her Baby!
by Make A Mark
About This Novel
Travel through time and space. He unexpectedly had a relationship with Yun Yun. Two years later, she broke off the engagement and was cheated, so Yun Yun came to visit her with her baby. Awakening the daddy growth system, I will actually get rewards for my daughter's growth. . . . . The first person in the five-star college competition. Absorb five strange fires. Seize the ultimate opportunity. Unknowingly, his daughter became the first person to conquer the continent! Many years later, Xiao Yan asked. "Emperor Ye Tian, how did your daughter practice so much that she is so talented?" Ye Feng smiled calmly: "As long as you have hands..."
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Official(32)Scraped 5d ago
The protagonist's character is similar to that of Xiao Yan
The protagonist's character is not good, isn't saving Yunyun just to sleep with her? How is he different from Xiao Yan? His fiancée messed around, but he also messed around, and he didn't take the initiative to break off the engagement. If it weren't for having a child and the nanny system, he would also be a scumbag.
How old is the protagonist? Got cheated and then broke off the engagement? Two years later, I brought my baby to my house.
It doesn't matter whether there is such a thing in another world, you can come out if you push it
I suggest you revise it and tidy up the plot!
There are various plots in the book that don't match up, and the ideas are not clear. What are they writing about? A 1 or 2-year-old child cannot be so defiant even in Dou Qi Continent.
Yun Yun has so few scenes
It's a pity that I'm a nanny, there's no drama to see Yunyun's outcome😙
come on
I really like the nanny's article. My daughter is very cute. I hope my daughter will become stronger and torture Xiao Yan. Number one in the world
You don't know how to write about a nanny, go and see how other people write it. Your starting strength is at least Dou Wang. You're so weak and you don't understand. Do you understand?
Excuse me
May I ask why the author still writes this kind of fanfic now? ? And it's the green protagonist's? ?
Write quickly
`Hurry up, all the flowers I have been waiting for have faded. How about the next chapter?
suggestion
The writing is very different. It's as "magical" as the TV series Battle of the Sky
It is recommended to change the name
I'm a loser and I just want others to love me
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Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 5d ago
The protagonist's character is similar to that of Xiao Yan
The protagonist's character is not good, isn't saving Yunyun just to sleep with her? How is he different from Xiao Yan? His fiancée messed around, but he also messed around, and he didn't take the initiative to break off the engagement. If it weren't for having a child and the nanny system, he would also be a scumbag.
How old is the protagonist? Got cheated and then broke off the engagement? Two years later, I brought my baby to my house.
It doesn't matter whether there is such a thing in another world, you can come out if you push it
I suggest you revise it and tidy up the plot!
There are various plots in the book that don't match up, and the ideas are not clear. What are they writing about? A 1 or 2-year-old child cannot be so defiant even in Dou Qi Continent.
Yun Yun has so few scenes
It's a pity that I'm a nanny, there's no drama to see Yunyun's outcome😙
come on
I really like the nanny's article. My daughter is very cute. I hope my daughter will become stronger and torture Xiao Yan. Number one in the world
You don't know how to write about a nanny, go and see how other people write it. Your starting strength is at least Dou Wang. You're so weak and you don't understand. Do you understand?
Excuse me
May I ask why the author still writes this kind of fanfic now? ? And it's the green protagonist's? ?
Write quickly
`Hurry up, all the flowers I have been waiting for have faded. How about the next chapter?
suggestion
The writing is very different. It's as "magical" as the TV series Battle of the Sky
It is recommended to change the name
I'm a loser and I just want others to love me
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