Urban Shapeshifting Druid

The subject matter is good, but it makes me feel like reading official history in the library. It shows too much literary talent. The author may have good writing skills, but this is an online novel, and excessive description will make a large number of people abandon the book.

I came here to read the novel. After reading it for a long time, I was confused. This thing should be classified as literature! The writing style is so delicate that I almost felt dizzy. It felt like literature mixed with novels. . . . . . Can't stand it 😱

No wonder this book collapsed. It is a novel rather than a long article. The theme is "cats", cats' living habits, cats' psychological activities, and the pleasure of killing mice. Most of the whole process is a monologue by the protagonist (that is, the cat). I don't know whether you are writing a novel or imitating Lao She's article on "Cat"

The protagonist is in the real world, in the virtual world, in the dungeon world. When he enters, when he exits, when he transforms, everything is unclear.

How can I write a DND without a female protagonist? The last one was a monk, so I put up with it. This time it's a druid! But you can try any species.

Judging from the chapters I've read, I feel like this book is so confusing!

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Without saying anything else, let's give it five stars.

These days, I'm used to reading fast food novels, so reading this again makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Unless they are reading study materials or important documents, reading online novels for entertainment and passing time, how many people are willing to chew on the words and ponder them slowly? ! It's not about going to school or appreciating ancient Chinese literature and poetry. Readers of online novels may care more about the plot, and the writing style only needs to be smooth (I know the plot after reading it anyway, who cares how it is described). There is no need to overly pile up words or overly describe irrelevant things. Story background, character psychology, environmental description, etc. Are of course necessary, but they must be appropriate. There is nothing wrong with adding various modifiers, various rhetorical techniques, etc. To the subject, predicate, and object (after all, the money is calculated based on the number of words), but it still needs to be appropriate. ~~ To put it simply, don't be too arrogant. It's a long story that rambles on and doesn't advance the plot of the story. After a few chapters, I feel like I've read it but not yet (because the only thing that can stay in my mind is the general plot, not the specific words or sentences)~~

More than 70% of the text is used to describe everyone's psychological activities, but not much is the most anticipated plot