
Doomsday Invasion of Online Games
About This Novel
A holographic game suddenly comes to Blue Star. Three years later, everything in the game appears in various city-states of Blue Star. The end is coming! Han Lin struggled in the apocalypse for ten years, and was finally trampled to death by a giant star beast in the new expansion pack. He returned to the moment ten years ago when the game was just launched...
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Official(8)Scraped 3d ago
People from inland should come and have a look and see the sea.
There are too many AIs used, and they are constantly pushing. You can only come back from the future once or twice. It keeps writing and makes reading uncomfortable.
I have to write down a single moment over and over again. Is this a story-writing session?
See Chapter 4
I can't help it, why is the writing so bad? You just need to continue writing Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, but the rest of it is still unclear.
This way of writing is so strange. Can you elaborate on how much AI was used?
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You seem to want to write more convincingly, but I think your writing is very uncomfortable and has an inexplicable feeling.
It's so trivial. Ordinary NPCs have to be described in hundreds of words even if they fail. When you see something, you have to recall it in hundreds of words. When you hear something good, you have to be shocked.
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 3d ago
People from inland should come and have a look and see the sea.
There are too many AIs used, and they are constantly pushing. You can only come back from the future once or twice. It keeps writing and makes reading uncomfortable.
I have to write down a single moment over and over again. Is this a story-writing session?
See Chapter 4
I can't help it, why is the writing so bad? You just need to continue writing Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, but the rest of it is still unclear.
This way of writing is so strange. Can you elaborate on how much AI was used?
Update update update update update update
You seem to want to write more convincingly, but I think your writing is very uncomfortable and has an inexplicable feeling.
It's so trivial. Ordinary NPCs have to be described in hundreds of words even if they fail. When you see something, you have to recall it in hundreds of words. When you hear something good, you have to be shocked.









