Plane Magic Academy
by Unmingshi
About This Novel
New fantasy world: Come into contact with legendary gods and abnormal creatures, and awaken different magical talents - "divine words", a total of 445 types. Seeing the Salamander incarnate as the four elements, [Heart of Salamander] helped him climb to the pinnacle of flame magic; [Dragon Blood Body] becomes invulnerable to swords after being contaminated with dragon blood; The Nordic god horse [Early Awakener] kissed him, and from then on he understood the horse language and became a skilled knight; Kneel down and worship at the temple of Thor, God of Thunder, and when you stand up, you find a [Blazing Hammer] next to you? "The sea gave me [the Siren]'s psychedelic song, and I will sing it to you..." "Saw the Fortune Spirit in Persia, [Pelley's Treasure] doubled the power of my enchanted weapons!" "I just touched the murloc in Babylon, and [murloc saw teeth] grew on all the bones I touched." "I escaped from the [Shenyinbo] monster in Japan and became invisible as a blessing in disguise. But why do the Chinese call me 'Six Baby'?"
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Man, your writing is actually very recognizable. Don't listen to what those people say, don't hang your book bag, the main line is confusing, etc. This thing can also be called personal characteristics. Only with style will more people like it, but the biggest problem I see is actually, well... Too few people watch it (insufficient publicity). Another one. In fact, you said that the protagonist's personality or mental activity characteristics are not obvious enough. (I recommend you to read some novels. Their structural descriptions are actually not as good as yours. But the protagonist is very personal and can be remembered, or the author has found some characteristics that readers can remember.) But I think it's a bit difficult to write an orthodox protagonist like yours. Attached, Silver Wheel, Fantasy World Adventure, Magic and Sword and Taxi (the author's first two books are relatively orthodox Western magic), Tang Can (the author of the historical text has a profound description of the background environment and multiple angles, and the psychological background of the protagonist is organized and orderly)
Various imitation dragons, the protagonist is still an ordinary person. After entering the school, he drinks a potion (PS is a potion that most people know) to release magic. No one has discovered it yet. The supporting characters are stupid enough. I personally feel that there are more Japanese than Europeans. (I don't like Japanese people)
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Don't get too entangled, I think your way of describing fighting and getting along with people is very comfortable to watch.
It's so messy. Isn't there a main line? Author: What exactly do you want to write? Adventure? Novel? Or show your erudition? Is the protagonist's daily life a foreshadowing of the main plot? What on earth do you want to express! ! ! I can't understand! ! ! ! So irritable! ! ! ! !
Can I say something? Although the author quoted eloquently and used various place names, myths, and other descriptions, it felt a bit confusing, incomprehensible, and unclear. I give you five stars. Goodbye!
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Man, your writing is actually very recognizable. Don't listen to what those people say, don't hang your book bag, the main line is confusing, etc. This thing can also be called personal characteristics. Only with style will more people like it, but the biggest problem I see is actually, well... Too few people watch it (insufficient publicity). Another one. In fact, you said that the protagonist's personality or mental activity characteristics are not obvious enough. (I recommend you to read some novels. Their structural descriptions are actually not as good as yours. But the protagonist is very personal and can be remembered, or the author has found some characteristics that readers can remember.) But I think it's a bit difficult to write an orthodox protagonist like yours. Attached, Silver Wheel, Fantasy World Adventure, Magic and Sword and Taxi (the author's first two books are relatively orthodox Western magic), Tang Can (the author of the historical text has a profound description of the background environment and multiple angles, and the psychological background of the protagonist is organized and orderly)
Various imitation dragons, the protagonist is still an ordinary person. After entering the school, he drinks a potion (PS is a potion that most people know) to release magic. No one has discovered it yet. The supporting characters are stupid enough. I personally feel that there are more Japanese than Europeans. (I don't like Japanese people)
Tell me your opinion
Don't get too entangled, I think your way of describing fighting and getting along with people is very comfortable to watch.
It's so messy. Isn't there a main line? Author: What exactly do you want to write? Adventure? Novel? Or show your erudition? Is the protagonist's daily life a foreshadowing of the main plot? What on earth do you want to express! ! ! I can't understand! ! ! ! So irritable! ! ! ! !
Can I say something? Although the author quoted eloquently and used various place names, myths, and other descriptions, it felt a bit confusing, incomprehensible, and unclear. I give you five stars. Goodbye!
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Two stars recommended. Total score 33.575. Serialized. Pseudo-history, epic, magic, multi-racial Single owner only trial reading. Pin it next time, if you like it more than dislike it 150 times -------------- An imaginative Xixuan work. I have read 11 chapters so far. The format of the novel is very classic and gives people an elegant feeling. The emotions of the article are true, there are no major logical bugs, and the writing style is far-reaching and contagious. I believe that the author will be able to write better and better and lead readers to experience this different world. It satisfies the ideal of adventure in this novel world that each of us had buried deeply in our hearts when we were young. -------------- Individual scores are usually 1-9 points. A score of 1 is the lowest and a score of 9 is the highest. A score of 5 represents an average level of online writing. 10 Points are specially added to represent the highest level in the world (at least within the cognitive scope of a single subject). Unique Thinking: 5 Knowledge: 5 Logic: 5 Concept: 5.5 Structure: 7.5 Writing style: 6.5 Impact: 5 Total score calculation formula: Thinking x1+Knowledge x1+Logic x1+Conception x1+Structure x0.63+Writing x1+Influence x0.37=Total score Total score: 33.575 Star rating formula: Let the total be divided into x, 30≤x<33 one star; 33≤x<36 two stars; 36≤x<39 three stars; 39≤x<42 four stars; 42≤x<45 five stars; 45≤x<48 six stars; 48≤x<51 seven stars; 51≤x<54 eight stars; x≥54 nine stars. Star rating: two stars -------------- If you have any suggestions or comments, please leave them in the comment area of the book list. If you like the evaluation method of this book and recognize the work of the owner, please don't forget to click and collect it~
Everyone thinks it is extraordinary, but this is what is ordinary But if you really enter an extraordinary world, do you want to go back~or continue to go deeper~
The author is quite talented... He created the setting of the divine words... Each divine word has a corresponding myth and legend, such as the cat whisperer with pig's feet...
A very good work. The author is well prepared, the writing is fluent, the descriptions are vivid, the plot is wonderful, and the story is reasonable. Even though the pace is a little slow, it is still a good book worth reading.
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