My Wife is a Great Lord

There are 15 protagonists fighting against more than a hundred orcs. Even if they have muskets, there are no bunkers in the Colosseum. In less than ten seconds, the orcs will run in front of you. In this way, none of your people will die. This is too unreasonable. It feels like there are a hundred wild boars, and they will all die without being able to kill a single person.

The setting of the elf bug is the same as that of the dragon. If it were not for the vest, this setting is expected to become one of the good background settings in the future? The overall story is good. The male protagonist is not a TJ. I just hope that the harem will not form a group later. It would also be good to have a few single brothers to eat dog food Not to mention that all the characters are flesh and blood, at least they are not background panels (it is not all about the protagonist c) As a time traveler, the only knowledge he brings is wine making and matchlock guns (later improved to alchemy array activation), so he can be regarded as a normal "ordinary person" Overall 9/10, rounded up to 5 stars

The most annoying thing is that the protagonist has traveled through time and still uses modern thinking habits. When it comes to fantasy, isn't it just to read stories about medieval lords? If I use this kind of thinking, I might as well read urban stories. Why does every time traveler make gunpowder and make guns? Forget about making a gun, you can actually aim it so accurately if you make a gun. I think you should first take a look at the advent of the first musket, and then the history of the development of the musket. There was no invention of fixed-loading breechloading and rifling in muskets. Being able to hit someone with a musket depends entirely on luck. Damn, use dense crowds to increase your hit rate.

After reading Chapter 100, this countess appeared twice. Do you deserve the title of the book? [Emot=default,12/]

This setting feels good, but there are so few novels of this type. I have only seen 2 of them so far. One cannot compare to the other.

I read the books at around 11 o'clock today and read them all in one sitting by 3 o'clock. What I felt was that the beginning was very boring and it was easy to dissuade newbies. The most important thing was that the author kept laying the groundwork and the protagonist was too poor to do anything. I can understand the foreshadowing, but the author's foreshadowing is still a bit too long and not very friendly to readers. I hope the author will have less foreshadowing next time when he opens a new book. Really, if you don't read too many pretense and slap in the face, you won't be able to read it if you calm down. Then in terms of character creation, plot, writing style, etc., The writing style is quite satisfactory. The front part of the plot is seriously bad, but the back part is very good. In terms of character creation, I think it is very good. For example, Anna, Thomas, the protagonist, and Alice (Alice's role is too small, but it feels good) are all well created. Some people don't like Alice as the heroine, mainly because He was too indifferent to the male protagonist in the past. He immediately chased him away when he lost an elf bug. He didn't care much about it. The scenes in the front were also pitiful. Although it was true that they really didn't want to get married, the male protagonist in the front was still a bit pitiful and miserable, which could easily make some readers unhappy (I was a little unhappy in the front, but after seeing the back, I thought Alice was quite cute). I still quite support this book. Come on, the author (broken sound) (*^ω^*)

Over three hundred and sixty chapters, the protagonist has no political wisdom at all. If he hadn't been the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

To be honest, I really like the beginning, but I prefer to watch the protagonist practice, and I don't really like to watch the development of rockets and bombs.

I hope the protagonist will not always be described as a boy. Boys' fantasies cannot survive in the feudal slave era, and men will not have unrealistic fantasies. Boys are too naive. Maybe you want to write about the growth of boys, but the price you need to pay will be very expensive and it is easy to get into trouble.

It is better not to write about this hot weapon. There is fighting spirit, magic and monsters. The writing about guns is really short and weak. You can rewrite it as a magic crystal gun or a magic crystal cannon. It's like enchanting a weapon. Isn't there an alchemist there? For weapons, you can refer to Dungeon and Fighter. After all, what you wrote was very popular 10 years ago. I still miss it quite a bit.