I Will Be Crowned King

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Don't say anything, hahahahaha, I didn't find it, hahahaha, just make do with it.

Moreover, the protagonist is too empty. Basically, the current events are pushing the protagonist. Every time the protagonist solves the incident, he does not make any profit... He is still walking on a tightrope... Especially the novelist. The protagonist actually did not ask for any benefits from the novelist. The first time he didn't know, it was fine. The second time, he didn't want some magic books or items, and he ran to the bishop...? Ning is a tool person • Really?

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It's like you don't know how to fight unless you are crippled. In the empire, in the vast land, if you have more people, you will lose, but if you have fewer people, you will win. There is no suspense at all. It is typical that except for the protagonist, everyone is a fool, especially the supporting nobles. The routine is similar to that of a refreshing novel, but it is not satisfying at all, and it is not as glorious and grand as a Mediterranean fictional historical novel.

It's a good read. I still recommend the author to write military novels. The fantasy novel you wrote is somewhere between a novice and a high-quality novel. The layout is very good, but the events are like an assembly line, uploaded one by one. It is gorgeous but has no depth. The protagonist has no goals. Moreover, the depth of the characters is too shallow, and the protagonist's luck is too strong. Those archbishops and black mages appeared too early, the city was too shallow, and the perspective of the protagonist was a bit too much. Except for the novelist, he had seen through everything, but he had no back-ups. He just went with the flow and could only be called the protagonist. Otherwise, the pawns who don't want to be chess players will always be pawns.

It feels a bit too bland and the plot is a bit draggy

The battle and fighting scenes are well written and gripping, but the plot progress is too slow and frustrating, and it's a pity to abandon it, which is annoying.

A piece of 20 belongs to me, it's really amazing to me. The student party has no money.

Don't always use the word "scum". It's too inconsistent and affects the perception.