This Swordsmanship is a Bit Stable

Similar to the book on the game of cultivating immortals, I think this book has more of a flavor of cultivating immortals, and the sense of immersion is very real. It makes me feel like I am reading a novel about cultivating immortals with a game template, and other novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist either despises this or that, says this, and then does that. He rescues female players or NPCs when he sees them. When a good guy is killed, he forces a wave of heroes to save the beauty, etc. This book is much more natural. This setting is also great, the plug-in is not particularly invincible, and the protagonist's character is also neither arrogant nor impetuous. Although the beginning is a bit naive, I can see the author's steady operation later. It's nice to watch... Fortunately, I didn't leave at that time... (It would be nice if the update were faster. I read more than 200 chapters from the first chapter in four hours) Come on⊙∀⊙! The author is great,

It's very good-looking, but it must not have a female protagonist. Why do I feel that there are signs of this coming? Otherwise, I would have no choice but to abandon the book. Putting this aside, I love you so much, the Lu family. I don't want the heroine, I don't want it

A suggestion to the author, when you describe the fighting scene, you should write down the destructive power, such as how many feet, how big, how far, the range of damage, etc. Otherwise, if you only write the fighting scene without describing the destructive power, it will make people feel that your book is a bit like a martial arts novel.

The author recommends eating a large amount of leek boxes, scallion rolls, yam and cashew nut porridge, and scallops and shrimp wontons, which can significantly cure the symptoms of shortness and weakness.

Most of the novels about cultivating immortals are about harems, like Stallion, which made me sick. I hope this book has a single female protagonist.

Let's synchronize the problem of setting attribute points.

Immortal cultivators will strengthen their physiques at every major and minor stage. The difference in physical strength is so huge, can mortals bear it? Especially the one whose body is said to be invulnerable. If you find a mortal woman, she might just be a bloody hole when she goes in and out... If you use a little force, she might be torn in half! You have overcome all the above. When you are a snake, you will not directly pass through it! You say you can still control it, but is it still fun to do this? Can a male mortal break through the defense? It's not a matter of breaking it with one clip, just turn it into minced meat... Think about that scene... It hurts!

Chapter 1, I only read the first chapter! ! Too wordy? Does the half-day explanation have anything to do with time travel? Is the word count forced?

The first part is really good, I quite like it, but what is the second part, tragic and tragic for the sake of force? When it comes to guarding the gate, it is obvious that the protagonist can go in immediately, instead of waiting for others to rush out and sacrifice a wave before doing so. Why do you write this to express that the old swordsman who helps the protagonist sharpen his sword is also present. Why does the protagonist feel like he is coming slowly? Heroes always have to wait until the last minute to appear? Later on, it was clear that there was something wrong with this Taoist sect, and there were a lot of actions, and I gave you a hard-edged look of paying attention to it but not taking it seriously at all. Or you should just stop writing about the discovery, don't foreshadow so much, and be more direct, and it might be more comfortable. It feels strange to find it and not take it seriously. Well, although you may feel that you have written about it, in fact, it feels like you care a little but not take it seriously. You also write those blaming things in the plot, saying that we have a God's perspective. Yeah, it's two different things. Okay, what you wrote makes the readers feel uncomfortable, so blame the readers. You want to write about the despair that you attach great importance to but are powerless, and it's okay to write a hymn to the courage of the human race, but you can't write that feeling. What you write can only give people the feeling The feeling of attaching importance to it but not fully paying attention to it makes people feel that the demons in the article are right, the virtue of the human race is not worthy, and they should quickly give up the territory. I can only say that the human race in the article can persist for so long only because the plot forces the human race to survive. The more I write, the more it collapses.

I have a question, will it be written later that players can enter the Nine Heavens?