Film and Tv: Starting from the Grandmaster
About This Novel
The new book "From Soldiers on the Border to the Lord of All Laws" has been released. It still has the same recipe. Please support me! Luo Heng traveled through time! I also brought a game system I made myself. From now on, a thousand punches will return to the road, add points! Gong Baosen: "Mr. Luo, if we want to unify the northern and southern martial arts circles, we need young people like you to come forward!" Ip Man: "Master Luo, there is no difference between people and boxing. Although I lost, I don't think Wing Chun is inferior to Baji!" Yi Xian Tian: "My junior brother Luo Heng's rules apply everywhere!" The second young lady of the Gong family: "Mr. Luo, it's better to think about progress than to think about stopping..." Luo Heng: "Don't stop writing, don't you? Don't worry, I'm in good physical condition!" Wang Jiazhi: "We are going to do a big thing, but I have no experience..." "Master Luo has a lot of experience. If I teach you, the process may not be polite..." As we learn more and more. Luo Heng gradually discovered that besides these warriors, there was another group of people hidden in this world... He once saw an old beggar on the streets of Shanghai: "Kid, I see that you are extremely talented, so I will leave the task of maintaining world peace to you..."
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Official(54)Scraped 11d ago
It's really good, it has an internal flavor
But can the plot advance faster? I'm still talking nonsense with Gong Er and Ma San. Some chapters don't affect subsequent reading even if I don't read them. I'm calling you stupid and heartless. It's really uncomfortable to ramble on.
The writing is good at the beginning. I have been obsessed with the plot since it was released. I want to write in depth but the writing style is not up to it. I just talk a few sentences in the fog without core ideas and theories. When I write cool articles, I write cool articles. When I write period articles, I just write period articles. Didn't you write an outline when you were going here and there?
It makes me angry
It's really annoying to see! Have a gun but don't practice marksmanship? I know that as long as I learn a few more boxing techniques and other martial arts skills, I will be able to fly directly, but I don't learn it yet, and I just keep doing it! If your marksmanship is not good, practice it! If you're not good at kung fu, go and learn other people's kung fu secretly! It's disgusting to keep suppressing the plot right there🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
I don't understand. Just do whatever you are told. The protagonist is not related to the other people, and he is not getting paid, but he is still helping others.
The protagonist shouldn't be too stupid, right?
You have to understand the inside story when you meet Japanese people in Jinlou. Those who are stupid and stupid have subjective effects. They don't look like normal people. The Japanese must be killed. The plan of the Jinlou group may also be to break the Japanese conspiracy. The protagonist kills people for a while and then leaves. The Japanese can send a second and third wave of people later. It is definitely better to understand the inside story at the beginning and then destroy the conspiracy to make the Japanese plan fail.
Most of the time, if you pretend to be a master, you will be defeated instead, and then you pretend to be a master who can injure the enemy by a thousand and damage yourself by eight hundred. You have no talent, and you all rely on the system to force your brain and body. Even if you are familiar with it, you will still decline without practice. Do you dare to compare with the masters? Without your own martial arts will, you will be nothing even if you practice till the end.
The story is smart and the rhythm is passionate.
There are obviously cheats, but the result is getting more and more frustrating, why not give them a cheat instead of giving them a talent!
The second world was not chosen well and the levels were not widened. Personally, I feel that there is not much difference between the world of Once Upon a Time and the martial arts of the Republic of China. The protagonist's path after transformation is not easy to unfold. If it were changed to the world under one person, the collision between Qi and Danjing after transformation would be better. In addition, the Tang Sect chapter of Under One Person, the period and the main theme are also easy to develop. Of course, if the world of Once Upon a Time is added with the background of Taoist priests descending from the mountain, it would actually be possible. Otherwise, I think the world of Once Upon a Time alone would not be of much significance. The strength level of the Ten Tigers in Guangzhou during the Huang Feihong period cannot be transcended, and the improvement to the protagonist is limited.
The sea is boundless
The world is too long and drags on terribly. Forty or fifty chapters are just right, and there is a lot of content. If it is longer, I can barely accept eighty chapters. As for this book, after more than 70 chapters, after a wave of pretentiousness on the Golden Tower, it's time to change the film. As a result, there are nearly 200 chapters. . Jump to the second world to see, good guys, from the early Republic of China to the late Qing Dynasty. . This rhythm. .
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Official(54)Scraped 11d ago
It's really good, it has an internal flavor
But can the plot advance faster? I'm still talking nonsense with Gong Er and Ma San. Some chapters don't affect subsequent reading even if I don't read them. I'm calling you stupid and heartless. It's really uncomfortable to ramble on.
The writing is good at the beginning. I have been obsessed with the plot since it was released. I want to write in depth but the writing style is not up to it. I just talk a few sentences in the fog without core ideas and theories. When I write cool articles, I write cool articles. When I write period articles, I just write period articles. Didn't you write an outline when you were going here and there?
It makes me angry
It's really annoying to see! Have a gun but don't practice marksmanship? I know that as long as I learn a few more boxing techniques and other martial arts skills, I will be able to fly directly, but I don't learn it yet, and I just keep doing it! If your marksmanship is not good, practice it! If you're not good at kung fu, go and learn other people's kung fu secretly! It's disgusting to keep suppressing the plot right there🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
I don't understand. Just do whatever you are told. The protagonist is not related to the other people, and he is not getting paid, but he is still helping others.
The protagonist shouldn't be too stupid, right?
You have to understand the inside story when you meet Japanese people in Jinlou. Those who are stupid and stupid have subjective effects. They don't look like normal people. The Japanese must be killed. The plan of the Jinlou group may also be to break the Japanese conspiracy. The protagonist kills people for a while and then leaves. The Japanese can send a second and third wave of people later. It is definitely better to understand the inside story at the beginning and then destroy the conspiracy to make the Japanese plan fail.
Most of the time, if you pretend to be a master, you will be defeated instead, and then you pretend to be a master who can injure the enemy by a thousand and damage yourself by eight hundred. You have no talent, and you all rely on the system to force your brain and body. Even if you are familiar with it, you will still decline without practice. Do you dare to compare with the masters? Without your own martial arts will, you will be nothing even if you practice till the end.
The story is smart and the rhythm is passionate.
There are obviously cheats, but the result is getting more and more frustrating, why not give them a cheat instead of giving them a talent!
The second world was not chosen well and the levels were not widened. Personally, I feel that there is not much difference between the world of Once Upon a Time and the martial arts of the Republic of China. The protagonist's path after transformation is not easy to unfold. If it were changed to the world under one person, the collision between Qi and Danjing after transformation would be better. In addition, the Tang Sect chapter of Under One Person, the period and the main theme are also easy to develop. Of course, if the world of Once Upon a Time is added with the background of Taoist priests descending from the mountain, it would actually be possible. Otherwise, I think the world of Once Upon a Time alone would not be of much significance. The strength level of the Ten Tigers in Guangzhou during the Huang Feihong period cannot be transcended, and the improvement to the protagonist is limited.
The sea is boundless
The world is too long and drags on terribly. Forty or fifty chapters are just right, and there is a lot of content. If it is longer, I can barely accept eighty chapters. As for this book, after more than 70 chapters, after a wave of pretentiousness on the Golden Tower, it's time to change the film. As a result, there are nearly 200 chapters. . Jump to the second world to see, good guys, from the early Republic of China to the late Qing Dynasty. . This rhythm. .
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