
The Heavens Begin with the Twin Peacocks with Heavenly Eyes
by Baked Snails With Hydrochloric Acid
About This Novel
His body is like a feather, his life is like a piece of grass. Let me ask all the worlds, who has any injustice? Shen Wei: Hello everyone, there is an old Taoist from the land in front of me. Do I want to become his teacher? Ps: This is the first time for a newcomer to write, so please take care of me~!
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Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
Come on!
The book is good and has potential. However, the author's writing skills still need to be polished a bit, and the plot arrangement must also have some foundation. It should not be too hollow and dramatic, but it must have a bit of flavor.
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
Come on!
The book is good and has potential. However, the author's writing skills still need to be polished a bit, and the plot arrangement must also have some foundation. It should not be too hollow and dramatic, but it must have a bit of flavor.













