Xianwu Zhutianxing

I will just say a few words. Whether it makes sense or not, you can argue or ignore it. So let's begin. First, after decades of practicing Taoism, life and death have not yet been seen. Although practicing Taoism is for immortality, where are the opportunities? You are still such a hero. May I ask where you have cultivated the two major states of mind inherited by Taoism: "the supreme forgetfulness of emotion and the supreme goodness like water". You still can't look away from people who have died once. You You can train your mind in the world of mortals, but what qualifications do you have to talk about Coach Nishang in the first place? Just because Wudang is good and she is evil, so what is good and what is evil. Secondly, I saw it when I traveled to the past. You are basically the soul, so you plan to return it and prepare to be sliced! After all, cancer! It's a miracle that you persisted for five years. If you go back and do it for tens or even hundreds of years, is there anything you can't let go of? Then you can lead the whole people to cultivate immortality and live forever. Have you thought about the consequences? Third, can't you find the plot? You can add to the plot, or you can destroy it, but what's going on with your righteous tone? The title of your book is Dao, Fighting with Heaven, which does not mean you should become a hero. Fourth, you said at the beginning that the protagonist reads all kinds of Taoist books. I want to ask, I have read all kinds of Taoist books. I also read Taoist books, Zhuang, Huang, Qing, and Nei. I have read them all, let alone serious things. It is really heart-wrenching to read. Finally, what name does your protagonist want to be called? He may be this or that, and there is no Taoist name. What is the author planning to express? There are three hundred and sixty-five side doors in the word "Tao". The one you cultivate, the four great fruits, the one you cultivate, the two major states of mind, the one you cultivate, the picture of immortality, how do you understand, "Warmth makes people addicted, coldness makes people sober, and satisfaction makes people unable to move forward." , Reluctance makes people progress. Love is desire, family affection is a bondage, morality is an obstacle, and conscience is a constraint. I am sorry for the short time of my life, all because we are like ants in front of this world. If we want to pursue the true meaning, there are only two words, "What is the meaning of eternal life?" Don't ask me if I have practiced Taoism. I can say right now, no. If you want to write a book like this on Taoism, please check the information first and make a summary. Otherwise, it will be easy for some people to say, you can be imaginative or make things up, but don't read a lot of Taoist books. What I believe in is considered faith, so don't do it randomly. Finally, I read 7 of the 19 chapters. I'm afraid of scolding people later, so I'll keep it here first and look back later.

He caught Lian Nishang again and again and let her go, then waited for her to kill her again. It looked disgusting, so it would be easier to just kill Lian Nishang😐

It's too much. The author's identity of the protagonist who traveled through time is too coincidental.

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Rubbish****************, the writing is really rubbish

The protagonist suffers too much, abuses the protagonist, and has no sense of enjoyment.