Staying in the World of Hong Kong Movies

Are you still talking about girls in movies? That's it anyway

I just read Chapter 10 and it's okay. Systematic stallion harem stories are now so popular that I feel sick when I read them. Personally, I don't think it's necessary to have a system. Plug-ins can also be benefits brought by time travel. For example, good physical fitness is the ability brought by time travel. You can learn whatever abilities you want, but don't be a super human. There are too many people who don't like systematic writing. Sometimes they would rather review the novels they have read, feeling that the results would be better without the system. The author can ignore some personal opinions!

In terms of descriptive writing, the sentences flow smoothly, although there are occasional typos. It doesn't have the writing style of a novice author, which is pretty good. The writing style can be considered humorous (the influence of Mr. Xing's lines cannot be ruled out), but from another perspective, I didn't see the author's writing style. The characters created by the characters are just so-so, not obvious. Overall, it's a cool article. Next is my criticism First of all, I only saw about twenty chapters and I couldn't stand it. In the first plot of Playing Back to School, Zhou Xingxing is the captain of the Flying Tigers (if you don't believe it, watch the movie yourself). Of course, I can't say Fuck if you force yourself to become a newly graduated police officer. Second, the author tries to portray the protagonist as Gou, but in fact the protagonist appears to be retributive, caressing about things (I guess there will be a stallion later, I didn't watch it), and even creates an incident. Of course, this has nothing to do with the development of the plot, but the protagonist or the Gou that the author has always emphasized, but the performance is the opposite. Finally, there is a problem with the logic. I saw the protagonist leaking the gun to Zhou Xingxing and others to see in order to grab food. I couldn't stand it. I mentioned before that he didn't rush to get the gun slowly and pick up girls first. If he didn't hide it well, why would he carry it with him and wrap it in something? Isn't this strange? Of course, some people may say that you have so many requests, why don't you write them down? This is a bit of a rant, and you don't want to see it, so get out of here. What I want to say is, I am a reader, and your writing is not good, so I can't give you my opinion? I am dissatisfied with my boss, do I have to go above him to be dissatisfied? Peaceful discussion, don't comment if you don't like it. Of course, I don't care if you delete the comment.

It used to be Ni Xiaoxian, but now it's changed to Vincent He. I feel like it's not as good-looking as before.

Poker kills people, I suggest you learn it.

After reading one or two chapters, it started with "Play Back to School". The movie should be about the Flying Tigers assessment. There are no submachine guns or flash bombs in the academy police assessment.

I don't have high hopes for the protagonist. I just hope that I can get promoted smoothly, and then I can do something to get rid of the tail safely. When everyone looks back, good guy, how did this kid climb so high and be able to be somewhat practical? Quan is better. If he is salty, he can leave it to his subordinates to pick up girls quietly. Many protagonists in Hong Kong dramas are the kind of people who can be pulled out to take the blame, but they can take credit from behind. Moreover, they are also very capable, but what I saw is He's a guy who keeps wiping his butt, can't even handle his own tail, is terribly cowardly, and has unclear abilities, but he feels very strong, but feels that he has no foundation. In the end, he's not comfortable at all, and he doesn't say he wants to be invincible, but his IQ is very low. Damn, the protagonist makes a mistake and has to rely on the author to make up for it with the plot. He seems to have said it very smoothly, but what he did in the end is stupid. The plot connection is even more like a fragment. It is over after one use. Secondary use is possible. It makes your plot seem to be spliced together.

No, Sir, are you in trouble because you don't update anymore?

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